Date: 07/18/2008 07:05 AM Title: bittersweet
Wow...this is wonderful! Loved the whole thing, nothing seemed out of place, like every word was carefully chosen to create this lovely tapestry of words.
My favourite line "he whispers words into the chocolate air " is absolute poetry.
Author's Response: What lovely feedback, thank you! I'm so pleased to know that it all seemed to fit to you. Thank you so much!
Date: 07/16/2008 02:50 PM Title: bittersweet
oh my goodness. How did I not know you'd written Bill/Charlie? HOW? gah! This was gorgeous. I liked the battle buildup,including Percy and the way they seem slightly out of place as men in their childhood home and, well, and all the needy 'gotta-have-weasley-now-ness'. Sexy!
Author's Response: I am so sorry, I should have told you!! I fail! I'm so glad you enjoyed this -- thank you so much! <3 <3 <3