Date: 05/12/2012 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was really nice! It feels like it really could have happened, and I loved how you kept it light and somewhat funny and sweet, but still managed to convey those uneasy feelings the DA members must have about the impending war. Well done!
Date: 12/22/2009 03:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
What, no review for this little piece of fluff and art ? Okay, I'm doing it, but don't expect something marvelous, I'm french and English is hence not my first language.
I really, really loved it. The dynamics between the two of them is sweet and caring, I love your Hannah and her good nature, and the patience and tact of your new Neville. And "the secret weapon" thing made me laugh aloud.
Although I don't think he became the DA's leader right from the start (but only when Luna, then Ginny were gone), here he takes his responsabilities with great maturity.
I'm just wondering, didn't Hannah hear the "love" ? I mean, if it had been me, I would have been head over heels for him ! And to hear him call me "love" ! Yiiii !
"Their kisses were fueled not only by the passion that came with the exploration of newfound feelings, but also with the dangers that had become a part of their everyday lives"
This is so true. I wrote a fanfiction about this, and shame on me, I think every character ended up kissing or even snogging an other, because of this, of this need to know they're alive, still.
So, a fav, five stars, and a big big thank you for this ! I will re-read it, often I think ! Thank you, again, and merry christmas !