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Reviewer: Esh10 Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2013 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 5: A Confrontation, Two Interludes and a Nightmare

Huh. This fic is leaving me sort of dumbstruck. I'm not sure how to feel about it. I assumed that polyamourous relationships would have more drama. I dunno.

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Date: 04/03/2013 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 4: Private Talks

Um. That worked? And that quickly? There's going to have to be some angst somewhere... and hopefully not just Ginny-caused. I'm not sure where this is going. I wasn't expecting this at all. xD
6- because I didn't hate it, but am left confused and thinking how weird the situation is. Also, dialogue and descriptions are clinical and lack a natural flow at times.

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Date: 04/03/2013 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 3: Erotic Dreams

Oh, gosh. I generally don't like these types of romance situations. The few I've read (that have sad endings, or bittersweet ones) leave me emotionally off. (What is Sirius hoping for? I hope nothing like the dream.) But this fic seems to be too interesting to pass up. Especially since Sirius will be a very dynamic character.

Reviewer: jocelynsmama Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/25/2008 09:05 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning

Ummm... The whole story is white.

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