Date: 11/17/2008 08:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
an excellent story. my only wish is that it was a bit longer....the story that is...lol.
Author's Response: This IS quite long for me LOL. Thanks for your comment :)
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[Report This]Date: 09/04/2008 05:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh this was excellent. Very very well done.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your comment, I'm really glad you enjoyed it :)
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Date: 08/17/2008 05:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was truly beautiful, and so completely believable!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading and commenting, I'm glad you liked it and thought it was believable! XD
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Date: 08/17/2008 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 1
yummy, so hot! but you need to change the rating. Not G
Author's Response: Hi, thanks so much for reading and commenting. I'm glad you liked it!
Thanks for letting me know, I'm sure I put the correct rating when I uploaded it but maybe I forgot, so sorry!
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