Date: 08/19/2008 07:02 AM Title: Happy New Year
Wow! That was certainly something! I like the way you changed point of view from Katie to Charlie then ending with Katie again in the last paragraph. It flowed very smoothly and made the tale more intimate. Nice work!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that you liked the story and the change in the perspective. Sometimes that's hard to carry through. I apologize that it took me so long to get a response to your review. Thank you for reading.