Date: 08/26/2008 05:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
Whew! That was...um...inspiring!
Seriously, I liked the way you handled this. Obviously, I think the physical activity was well written, (very well written,); but I like the way you handled the emotional aspect, too. The affection between the characters has a strong presence without being too much. After all, they know they love eachother, it's the action they've been without!
And I love the funny bits sprinkled here and there. The spiderman kiss reaction was hysterical, and Hermione's reaction to her book was perfect! Thanks for sharing with us!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for such a wonderful review. The emotional part of my stories are always the most important for me, even when I'm writing smut. I love seeing a real connection between the characters so I'm glad that came across for you :)