Reviews For White Out
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Reviewer: Yurippe Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05/13/2012 06:57 AM Title: White Out (one-shot)

That was really lovely! Luna is my favourite character for a reason, and I think you portrayed her rather accurately, although maybe even she wouldn't think being stripped by Draco's minions is normal.

Reviewer: Caleb Nova Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/13/2010 03:15 AM Title: White Out (one-shot)

An excellent look at the NevilleLuna dynamic. Well written and well enjoyed.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. Be sure to read the followup, The Way You Do That Thing You Do. ;-)

Reviewer: iris m Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/05/2008 03:27 PM Title: White Out (one-shot)

why did help have to show up, please add more to this like.... well i dont know but i love luna and neville stories.

Author's Response:

Hagrid showed up because I felt that was logically what would have happened, when they did not come to the station on time. Luna and Neville are not two characters (to my thinking) who would have just jumped on each other and had sex or anything. So there was really nothing else that was going to "happen" anyway. I suppose they would just have talked some more. But really, the scene was over.

 

Thanks for your feedback. :)

Reviewer: bga1974 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2008 05:13 PM Title: White Out (one-shot)

Such a sweet story. I adore Neville and Luna. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you! I've never written them before, but they're a lot of fun. :)

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