Date: 07/07/2009 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 34: A Shaggy Dog Story
Oooh I LOVED the deviation! Every kind of it (-;
Seriously, thanks for the great fic! The attraction between the two was so magnetic that it jumped from the screen. I was a bit surprised by Remus' characterization... I just didn't get the justification for him being such an ass, given canon. Still, Bill was amazing, with both his flaws and virtues totally believable. I loved how you tracked his obsession back to his schooldays, and didn't try and make Sirius any saint, either. You had me cheering along with all of them, and I'm so glad things worked out for them better than in canon! Very *ahem* satisfying.
Cheers! And hope to read more of your work!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for such a full review. I'm glad you enjoyed the read. Well, mostly. I like Remus a lot - but I needed him to act like that for the plot. Someone had to complicate things. He was scared and in love - that's all I can say to justify it! I'm glad you read 'Dragon Chaser', too.
Date: 11/19/2008 09:42 AM Title: Chapter 7: With His Tail Between His Legs
This is so dirty and wrong. I LOVE IT!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Dirty? I hope so, I was going for dirty. But wrong? Bill and Sirius? Nah! Perfect match! JKR actually intended to put it in Order of the Phoenix, but then it turned out to be so long and she had to cut something ... - at least that's what I choose to believe. Thanks for loving it - it means so much!