Date: 01/05/2009 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hmm. A deeper subject than we usually see tackled in fan fic. I'm not really sure if I see what you're trying to communicate. Did Hermione not mean to get pregnant, or did she not mean for the potion to take effect in such a way. Or, if in fact, maybe you're not trying to show your opinion at all, but maybe just trying to prod your readers to explore their own thoughts on the topic.
Well. Either way, I hope you've achieved what you wanted. I'll agree with you that there would have been mixed emotions. But, I think every individual who ever makes such a decision will have their own feelings when all is said and done.
Date: 01/04/2009 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very well written, even though it's so sad. I'm hoping for a prequel or sequel :P
