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Reviewer: Brissygirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/11/2009 03:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Date: 04/11/2009 03:36 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ron is such a lovely boyfriend taking care of Harry, giving him a lovely massage despite his protests.
The next day was incredibly hot, it sounds like Harry was desperate for some fun in the sack with Ron.
Well written great job!!
Reviewer: TheTrioMakesMeHot Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/09/2009 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Date: 04/09/2009 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very nicely done, very good imagery. You might want to know that you have LJ code in the opening paragraph and your summary page has Harry paired with Rose Weasley instead of Ron.