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Reviewer: melakem Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2009 05:16 AM Title: Divergence

Wow!  I'm so glad to have had the chance to read this!  You've done a marvelous job of capturing the regret of "what might have been." 

The whole piece is very believable.  I like that Snape and Lily both have such innocent memories.  I find it very telling that Lily's is one bit of a normal day, while Snape's is a special day, though still just kind of a plain old day that could happen to anyone.

The ending was bittersweet with possibility and crushing with lost chances.

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