Date: 07/19/2009 04:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
I didn't think I'd like this when I opened it. I never saw Snape as a loving individual with regards to friends. But God, has that changed. This may be the most beautiful story I've ever read. The characters building a love with each other that touched me. I thought it could be cheesy, I thought it could be PWP, I thought it could be the worst possible thing. But it wasn't any of the things I feared. Ron and Hermione were still Ron and Hermione and Snape was still Snape, and they worked together in a way I could not have imagined. Words can't really express how much this story really meant; this story of compassion and two men finding each other and themselves. I so wish that I could say more. That I could tell you everything that meant something. Absolutely lovely.
I enjoyed that Ron became jealous of Severus and Hermione. When I first read that, I thought you spoke of him wishing Hermione wouldn't touch Severus. But what you were saying meant so much more. Ron was jealous that Severus immediately caved to Hermione, and to him, was still distant. I loved this story.
Author's Response: OMG! *blushes* This is quite possibly the nicest review I've ever received! Thank you so much for taking a risk on this story and for seeing all I was trying to say.
Date: 04/19/2009 03:20 PM Title: Chapter 1
this was so very good. I love how ron, could give so much of himself and, what he had for a good beyond himself. i hope to see more of your stuff.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! The Ron and the Snape part was my very favorite to write! So much healing going on! *sigh*
Date: 04/19/2009 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
What an interesting piece. I'm definitely a het kind of girl, (though I don't have anything against slash. It's just not for me.) so, I'm glad to see that the sex was het. However, the bit of this story that intrigues me is the strength of the relationships. I like the way you had Ron and Hermione always strong, but built into the two relationships with Snape.
I don't know. I think I'm not putting my thoughts down well. I was very moved by this story. I read it without noticing the threesome notice at the top. (How? I don't know. I was distracted, I suppose.) Anyway, I'm glad I did miss that, if I'd seen it, I likely would not have read your tale, and I'm glad that I did read it. It is a very touching story of love and healing, hope and understanding. Thank you for posting it here.
Author's Response: Thank you sooo much for taking a chance on this! I know "threesomes" is sometimes scary and I truly wish there was someway to convey that a story is more then that...ya know? So, thank you for reading!