Reviews For A Perfect Swim
Reviewer: lilly Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/18/2009 02:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: 08/18/2009 02:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thank you so much for let me how your imagination transformed in to words a image I created!
It was wonderful! You could pass perfectly their feeling of discover the love for each other, of to be together in a peaceful time, having all the future and no fear to love.
"I could know exactly how they were feeling"! :)
Lilly
Reviewer: hermionenessie Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/08/2009 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: 08/08/2009 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
that was so sweet. i loved it. perfect little moment between the two of them, and i could practically feel the water and the warm day myself as if i were there with them.
Reviewer: TaMara Signed 
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Date: 07/31/2009 08:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
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Loved it. Want more!
Reviewer: melakem Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/31/2009 02:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Date: 07/31/2009 02:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sexy and sweet. A perfect read for a lazy summer day1