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Reviewer: padfoot2304 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2008 08:40 AM Title: One Shot

Hmmmm ... while I usually like your style this story just didn't flow right. It also has some logical flaws. Have a look at "Harry's True Love" at FictionAlley: http://www.fictionalley.org/authors/the_dork_lord/HTL.html

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