Date: 08/17/2009 10:42 PM Title: A Mutual Tolerance
Nice work! Well done. I gain respect for Draco and begin to hope for his future, but in a very realistic way. I like that you didn't try to make the reader actually "like" Draco, but rather just to consider his plight.
Neville and Harry were both as I'd like them to be, and as I'd expect. Seamus' temper was a good touch. Kept everyone from being too perfect. Snape was an excellent addition. Each boy was exactly right in his assessment of Severus' storage place.
Thank you so much for your very kind words! I'm so glad that you enjoyed my piece, and thank you so much for taking the time to review. This was the most amazing a review that an author could ever hope for and I'm truly over the moon right now, so again, thank you:)