Date: 02/07/2010 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 2
Well, I really like the storyline and the fact that you have captured the personalities of the characters. I like the fact that their feelings come through despite their separation and apparent death (in Ron's case). I would like this story to go on for a while longer (much longer) for the pure enjoyment of it. Please update soon. I will continue to read.
Date: 09/22/2009 06:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
Really interesting idea! One grammar point: it should be "Together, SHE and (Bill, Harry, etc.)" You're mixing subject and object pronouns otherwise. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: yes thank you for pointing that out! very silly mistake of me, I was just typing it so fast I must have missed it
Date: 09/10/2009 06:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
HOLY NUT-NUT....MORE! MORE! MORE!!!! THIS WAS SO GOOD...POST MORE SOON...PLEASE!!!! I WILL BE LOOKING FOR IT!!!! VERY GOOD STORY.
Author's Response: haha holy nut nut? thats a new one, I definitely have to keep adding more then!
Date: 09/10/2009 03:11 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hi! Nice first chapter, hoping to read the following chapters soon: Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: thank you =), yes new chapter on its way soon, with school and all its hard to get my thoughts on paper but its coming soon!