Date: 03/27/2011 02:26 PM Title: Mommie Dearest
I made it back over to TQP and I'm still reading! I miss your writing and hope you have it in you to push out another chapter. Your Draco development is a great success and very impressive for not having ever written Draco in lead before! Kudos and best wishes :)
Date: 02/16/2010 09:43 AM Title: Mommie Dearest
Thanks for another great chapter! Narcissa's madness is a nice touch. It makes it even easier, I think, for Draco to recreate himself into a man he will respect. I know I've said this before, but, your Asteria is just wonderful. When JKR first revealed her, I imagined her as a copy of Narcissa. I've read others who compared her to Hermione, and I like that image. But, I'm really connecting with this version of her. I like that she is imperfect, yet perfect for Draco. Draco's reaction to Ginny's labor, or rather, to the importance of that for Harry, is a terrific illustration of how much Draco is changing.
Date: 10/15/2009 10:59 AM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Another terrific chapter! I really like your Asteria. She's cheeky, but kind. Both she and Draco seem to have some real depth to them. (I never expected to be a Draco fan, but you and a few other authors are opening my mind. grinning)
Date: 10/13/2009 10:55 PM Title: First Contact
*Hesitates, peeks in...and gets hooked by surprise!* Okay, I'm not a big Draco lead man fan myself, but I love canon and for some reason, I've fallen in love with a fantastical ideal of who Asteria Greengrass is...I will support you in this and am looking forward to seeing this pair development separately and individually! Good job so far!!
Date: 09/25/2009 08:14 AM Title: Behind Enemy Lines
Well, I enjoyed chapter 2 as much as chapter 1. I do like the interaction between Draco and Teri. She's good for him.
I laugh at Draco and Ron's animosity toward each other. They may never be close friends, but I think they will learn to respect each other.
"Son of gram" laughed out loud. I love when writers come of with these cute little things.
Waiting for chapter 3.
Date: 09/14/2009 02:24 PM Title: First Contact
I put off reading this as I'm a total Ron/Hermione fan, but I must say "good start". I'll be back for more.
I really like your Asteria. Draco does need someone who can stand up to his "up bringing".This is really interesting and I can't wait to see how you go with this.
Author's Response: Thanks for giving this a chance. I can't help myself with this and it's just pouring out of me.
Date: 09/11/2009 07:11 AM Title: First Contact
Great first chapter, already got me hooked for the next chapters: it seems a very interesting journey with Draco and Asteria has begun and I can't wait to read more of it.
Author's Response: I'm so glad to know that people are reading it and wow! Liking it!