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Reviewer: Napchic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10/02/2009 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 1

First off, i started the story thinking it would be rather satisfying to see Percival die. Sorry. but i did. And then I meeped  a little at the thought of him being adored and missed by Audrey. So i was slightly less enthusiastic. 

 

And then i laughed at how wonderfully heady with power he was at his rubber stamp of veto. I also LOVED "the power" in italics. It's that much funnier in italics.  

 

And then i found that I liked your Percy. I think it's cute how on the exterior, he's eloquent and professional but in his head he called people "bloke." I could see that. Percy is a bit of a poser. 

 

And then i started feeling honestly bad for him, and I sort of hated that they took his nice robes, of which i am sure he was very proud, and then he was all struggly and drowny and i kind of hated them for being assholes and killing him where no one would find him. 

 

Is it wrong that Percy's death has bothered me most of all? It's like the others went out doing what they love or were talking rather stupid risks, but poor Percy was just duped and murdered. I love that you made him a sympathetic character for me in so short a story. Who'd have thunk it?



Author's Response:

My Dearest of Friends!

  How are you??? Miss you tons! *sighs* And now on to Percy's death. He was the brother I liked the least....probably family member is more like. It's funny that you say you felt bad for him because of Audrey as I sort of did too after I wrote it. I feel that he did turn himself around after the war. I think I wrote this story with the pompous Percy from the earlier books in mind.

His death was horrible in that he will probably never be found and poor Audrey will never know what happened. My beta said that the description of his death actually gave her "the creeps". *shudders*

 I am a devious little scamp indeed! *slaps self* Arthur is up next. I love Arthur and so I don't plan on being too cruel. As always I just love it when my little poppet stops by. (>:

Much love,

Your Insane and Crazy Friend *smak*  

Reviewer: kareem33 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2009 11:35 AM Title: Chapter 1

That was BRILLIANT!  Percy, as a mob hit-victim is perfect.  Thank you!

 One question though, are you including the Weasley women(Molly and Ginny) as well?  Just curious. 



Author's Response:

Hello Dearest kareem33!

  I am so relieved that you liked it! Thank goodness! And yes, I do plan on writing the deaths of Molly and Ginny as well as our girl. (Bless them!) Thanks again for being so kind and I am truly thankful that you liked your story! *hugs*

XXX,

missgranger2

Reviewer: KaL Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2009 06:10 AM Title: Chapter 1

Bill, Ron, Charlie, and now Percy.  Only George, Fred (?) and Harry to go.  We're over half way there now.  I'll be watching.

Author's Response:

Hello My Lovely!

  I hope you are well, dear! *hugs* Yeah, we are halfway with all the blokes. *grins* I think I'll leave Fred's death as is because it broke it my heart when it happened.  As always, I love hearing from you, dearest!!!!

XXX and BIG hugs!

Your Nutty Friend (>:

Reviewer: iris m Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2009 09:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

That was so messed up, but very good...still that was messed up, damn, what can I say.....that was by far the craziest way to kill someone...hope to read the next one soon :) hint hint.....

Author's Response:

Hello Dearest!

  Poor Percy. I just couldn't help myself as he usually is the least liked of the Weasley family. Next up is Arthur and I promise not to be so crazy. I'm so glad you liked it and thanks for your lovely comments! *hugs*

XXX,

missgranger2  

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