Date: 12/08/2009 06:14 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very good story. Harry rolled over to face her so he could really look at her. His eyes kept trying to cross, but finally he cleared his vision and really saw her. She looked like she always did, a little spacey, but also truly in the moment. But there were other things he hadn't noticed before. A bit of sadness, a bit of grief in the corners of her eyes and the quiver of her lips. Harry swallowed and took her hand. He remembered how she had always shrugged it off when Harry had asked her if she was ever lonely, ever sad. Then he remembered the melancholy he had felt while in her room and peering at that picture she had obviously spent a lot of time on, the one that depicted what she had thought of as "friends."
That was perfection. It’s the best description of Luna I’ve read.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really have enjoyed getting to know Luna lately...such a rich character!