Reviews For A Heart Broken
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Reviewer: Dome 36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/09/2010 09:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

This story deserves the Oscar for one of the most stupid stories ever written. Ron bashing is absolutely annoying, In your story it reaches a new record. Your attempt  to make Ron look a little better to the reader and to give him a "compensation girl" almost at the end of the fic is so ridiculous that made me laugh.

If you want to write fics with Harry/Hermione/Ginny, go ahead. But please try to avoid Ron bashing as a way to justify everything.

Reviewer: flatliner15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2010 01:26 PM Title: Chapter 11

sorry, but this story is just plain stupid, sure, all ronbashing stories tend to be but this one takes the throne. i mean, your wife is walking around naked before other men, leaves your kids out running around naked too, you must be a bastard if you don't approve of that

Reviewer: ker_splat Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2010 09:43 PM Title: Chapter 1

I wish more people would put Ron Bashing warnings on their stories. I read the first chapter (having never read any of your other fics) and thought that you were going on a very tough path of delving into the relationship between Ron and Hermione. Don't get me wrong, what Ron did was horrible and indefensible and I was very curious to see how their life together could continue. I even went back and skimmed Stranded to see if there was any justification for Ron's beliefs.... of which there was very little. So here was the potential for a very dark, very complex R/Hr story.

I don't have the words to express my disappointment in seeing how you took took Ron's massive screw up and used it as the justification to turn every single character against him. It was wrong for Ron to hit Hermione but perfectly fine for Ginny to use magic to assault her brother. Lots of Bad!Ron, bad which... don't get me wrong, was to some extent completely justified! But you took it way over the top.

I've never written a negative review before, normally when I have nothing nice to say I just shut the Hell up. But your ending left me so disgusted... Why did Ron hit Hermione? Because he thought she had slept with Harry and Ginny. And how does this story end? With Hermione heading off to bed Harry and Ginny. You justify and confirm Ron's jealousies.

Reviewer: Grownupron Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/27/2010 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

All of your fics seem to be a really convoluted and unbelievable tale contrived to put Harry/Ginny/Hermione together.

Why not start out that way and avoid all the wildly OOC characterizations?

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