Date: 07/21/2011 03:44 AM Title: The One Who Loves You The Most
OMG! That was...wow...beautiful, moving, amazing. Heart-breaking and heartwarming. The love Ron has for his daugter, that the whole Weasley clan have for each other...is so wonderful and wonderfully portrayed. I really, really love this. And that last two paragraphs were flawless. wow.
Date: 07/10/2011 11:51 PM Title: The One Who Loves You The Most
This is terrific. I'm impressed that you thought to use such an often unseen syndrome. Three of my children and I are Locks of Love donors, so, I'd heard of alopecia before. I'd never thought, though, about just how hard it must be for a young person to endure it.
I liked the way you had Ron and Hermione handle things. Ron growing his hair out for a wig was beautiful. You've written both of them as really good parents. I like Andon, too. He's a nice change from Scorpius, Scorpius and more Scorpius. (And boy, oh, boy, do I hope that snot Melly rots!)