Date: 01/02/2012 11:23 PM Title: Zenith
Yay, you finished it! And a very nice ending it is. I like the way you allow your characters' stories to gradually unfold. Thanks for another great tale.
And it is now nearly 1:30 am and I must go to bed.
Author's Response:
Mark and Lavender will return in a story called Moons.
Thank you, and goodnight. :-D
-N-
Date: 12/16/2011 10:50 AM Title: Perihelion
This is a wonderful story. I have truly enjoyed it.
Author's Response:
Thank you. There is one more chapter, set two days later. I'll be posting it in a few days time.
-N-
Date: 12/08/2011 09:28 PM Title: Transit
And you leave us hanging! Please update quickly.
Author's Response:
It won't be long before the story reaches Perihelion, and finally, Zenith. -N-
Date: 12/08/2011 09:23 PM Title: Aphelion
Glad Parvati set her straight.
Author's Response: Yup :-D
Date: 12/08/2011 09:17 PM Title: Eclipse
You tell her Mark! I remember him from one of you other stories. Boy, is Lavender wrong about him!
Author's Response:
Thank you. You do, Mark has a chapter (Waning Moon) in Tales of the Battle. -N-
Date: 12/08/2011 09:05 PM Title: Occlusion
As usual, you set up the scene beautifully. (I just finished reading the Outlander series, so the "accent" was easy to understand.)
Author's Response: Thank you. Finding the balance between realistic, understandable and offputting accents is a problem. I'm glad you think I succeeded. -N-