Date: 06/06/2014 08:15 AM Title: Fred and George's Busy Day
I love to read your work! You have outdone yourself with this one. I swear, reading the back and forth between Fred and George is so quick and snappy, it reminds of really good screwball comedy dialogue. Perfect for the twins! And I love the cartoon image brought on by, " Fred pulled the cupboard forward, shrank himself, and ran into what looked like a large mouse hole, his brother following behind him."