Date: 10/22/2006 08:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Pangs of jealousy become pangs of lust for our dear couple, this one was down sexy. She proved him wrong! What I love about your stories is the simple dialogue, the few words they say to eachother speaks volumes really. I love how you've allowed Ron and Hermione to become comfortable with each other to the point where they're not embarrassed to say the sweetest things to each other.