Penname: eterna_romantica03 [Contact] Real name: Elena Valdιs
Member Since: 05/27/2008
Membership status: Member
Bio:

Started reading fanfiction because of my daughter and my disappointment with DH (its epilogue) and it became a hobby. I like to explore the 'what ifs' in fandom. 

A hopeless romantic. Favourite pairings, Hermione/Draco, Ginny/Draco, Harry/Ginny, Hermione/Bill.


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Reviews by eterna_romantica03
A Second Chance by inell Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary: After making several mistakes in his life, Ron agrees to a blind date only to find himself with a second chance at getting things right
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4662 Read Count: 2753
[Report This] Published: 01/13/2006 Updated: 01/13/2006
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Date: 07/18/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This pairing is not my favourite but the way you tackle their breakup as well as getting together again was well done.  You were right on the money about Ron's feelings about himself. That's exactly what I picture him thinking in the books. I enjoyed reading this.

Elena 

A Good Start by inell Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Life isn’t like the movies
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter
Genres: Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: Demelza House Fundraiser
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4451 Read Count: 1240
[Report This] Published: 09/15/2006 Updated: 09/15/2006
Reviewer: eterna_romantica03 Signed
Date: 06/18/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice story.  Found it while browsing.  Sometimes one finds little surprises like yours.

A Bad Decision by inell Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Fred makes a bad decision.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Hermione Granger, Fred Weasley
Genres: Fluff
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1700 Read Count: 3564
[Report This] Published: 12/03/2006 Updated: 12/03/2006
Reviewer: eterna_romantica03 Signed
Date: 12/18/2008 Title: Chapter 1: A Bad Decision

Not my favourite pairing.  I enjoyed this little story. It was tender, amusing and I could actually picture Hermione (one of my favourite characters) with one of the twins. Good job,

Elena 

Fate of the Generations by BrandedFaithfully Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 125]
Summary: Past Featured StoryIn the summer after sixth year, Harry is faced with many decisions; how to proceed with the horcrux hunt, how to keep his friends safe and what to do about his ever changing feelings towards a certain red-haired girl. What if this 'power the Dark Lord knows not' was in him all the time, but was being repressed? And could Ron's first Order mission bring back the answers that could unlock this power, forcing all of them to relive an ancient story and break the curse that became the fate of the generations.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Golden Trio
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Mystery, Romance, Trio
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 33 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 164021 Read Count: 40330
[Report This] Published: 03/28/2007 Updated: 12/03/2008
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Date: 08/02/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One – A New Spy Is Born

I am curious so I will keep on reading.  

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Date: 08/02/2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 – Escape and Punishment

I am big a Dramione fan so I am hoping Hermione would play a role in this story as well as Draco whom I think   J K didn't develop well enough in any of her books.  It's too early in your story to make any more comments about it though so I will keep on reading.

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Date: 08/02/2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 – Friends and Enemies

I like Ron, I do.  He is loyal, brave, even smart but with Hermione? It is your story.  Yes, Hermione is very generous and trusting, and I can see why Draco will slither his way into the trio through her but like Hermione I do hope there would be some redemption for Draco at the end.

Author's Response: Dear eterna, Thanks for taking the time to leave me a review.  I note that you're only at the beginnings of this story so I would encourage you to keep going because some of your comments will come in to play in later chapters.  Thanks again and take care!

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Date: 08/02/2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Proof and Consequences

I was wondered about Harry's logic where Ginny is concerned.  Protecting her from whom?  Weasleys are 'Muggle lovers', they are friends with The Boy Who Lived and their parents are members of the Order of the Phoenix all of these endangered them all not just Ginny.  Regardless of whether or not Harry and Ginny were couple Voldemort had not problems killing them all just for fun anyway.  The scene between Harry and Ginny was well done. All the ambivalent feelings were well painted.

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Date: 08/05/2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 – His First Mission

This is getting more and more interesting. By the way, Ron involved in an adventure, helping Harry or his family is the kind of Ron I like and the one I like to read about. Well done with the scene involving Draco and Hermione, you did a good job describing what was going through Hermione's mind as well as her body's reaction.

Elena 

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Date: 08/05/2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 – Correspondence

But Harry did kiss Hermione in the lips! Do friends kiss on the lips? Where I come from we do not.  

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Date: 08/05/2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 – Advice and Poetry

I feel for Narcissa and Draco. Hard to believe Draco is not much, much damaged.

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Date: 08/05/2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 – Jealousy Unchecked

See, now I can not go  to sleep because I have to know what is going to happen!  Pansy is a ... you know.

Author's Response: Boy, I'm glad to see I have you hooked!! 

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Date: 08/09/2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Acting

Draco has to pretend he likes Hermione, but,  there is the tiniest pang of guilt and some else growing within him. Hermione, on the other hand is wondering about Draco's change of heart.  Harry and Hermione have to pretend to be a couple (Why oh why J K you had to disappoint so manyt? Anyway...) which may have unexpected consecuences. Ron has surprised me but I am sure not for how long. He is like a ticking bomb, adult behaviour eludes him when it is most needed. Sorry I know you like the guy.  I still enjoy your story though.



Author's Response: I assume you like H/Hr, but alas, I am a canon girl.  Only according to the books.  I like all my characters, not just Ron.  Hope you will, too.  Thanks again.  Glad you're enjoying it!

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Date: 08/10/2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Apart and Together

Well done! Who was the hooded man? Ron's injury worries me. I know I am taking a long time to catch up but life, 'real life" happens all the time plus I have stories to read in at least four more sites therefore I have to manage my time wisely. Once again, good chapter.

Elena 

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Date: 08/13/2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - An Unlikely Friendship

I feel for Draco. It is like being part of mafia gang, one can easily get in but getting out is nearly impossible.  I like what you did with Draco and Harry at the hospital. From the body language through Harry's inner thoughts. I am reading many stories at the same time, yours here and some at another sites that is why I am moving so slowly catching up. 

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Date: 08/13/2008 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - His One and Only

Draco is going down the same path as Snape. Reluctant Death Eater having second thoughts about the meaning of it all only to end working as a double agent on behalf of those he used to loath. My concern is that Draco may end up having the same fate as poor Snape. I guess I have to keep on reading.  Lucius is a piece of work, let me tell you.