One of your favorites, Demosthenes...and certainly one of mine. Exceptional for a first fic, and simply incredibly well-written! You really light up the relationship between Harry and Hermione here, in a way that is both funny and charming. The ending sentence, in particularly, was just fantastic. I love it!

This story has the honour of being my first ever QUIDDITCH PITCH fanfiction read, and I have only just finished it, at last. The last chapter was, admittedly, slightly confusing, but when contemplated in reference to the rest of the story, it provides a fitting end to a story that is overall worthy of J.K Rowling.

While staying perfectly close to the original storyline, 'Together Forever' has everything- an engaging beginning, laughter, anxiety, romance, peril, comedy, emotion, suspense, and a heartbreaking ending when they lose their memories. Not too long to be boring, yet just long enough to be interesting.

I loved this plot- the whole 'connection' idea really captures your Harry Potter imagination, and provides a whole new perspective on the classic love story of Hermione & Ron. Truly they belong together, forever!

The whole story is just as complex and masterful as any of the original Harry Potter books, and it will always be on my list of Favourite Reads. Well done indeed, thesteppyone, I absolutely loved this! Good work!

It took me two months to finish 'Fate of the Generations' to this point, and another month to form an opinion on the story. I have read a great amount of fan-fiction in my time, not just from Harry Potter, and each time, I leave a summary of my personal view. Indeed, at school, my friends call me 'the Scyther' due to my highly critical reviews of books and films we see or read as a class. However, this is not an autobiography; on the story itself, I have little to say, save this; in this reader's opinion, you would be hard pressed to find a story in The Quidditch Pitch to match this masterpiece.

In length, structure, development and involvement of characters, supense, and pure captivating atmosphere, this particular story makes for one of the finest fan-fiction reads I have ever read. J.K Rowling would be proud. I eagerly await the promised two chapters and epilogue. Congratulations!

So far, so good. Another impressive story, BrandedFaithfully. I particularly like the style of writing here, and in terms of plot the excrutiating build-up to Ron and Hermione's romantic boom in Chapter 6, and Ginny and Harry's antics just make me laugh. Still have to finish, but so far, a pleasing and humorous read! Well done.

I love this. A good clear plotline, long enough to be enjoyable but not short enough to be boring, and an interesting plot twist. Served with a generous helping of erotica as well. Good work!

Author's Response: thank you.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Very clever! I was really thinking this was about Ron/Lavender and Hermione looking on, but the twist at the end really surprises you. Very well-written! Good work!

An excellent piece of erotica, well done!