Penname: MacBeth13 [Contact] Real name: Beth
Member Since: 04/29/2009
Membership status: Member
Bio:

I've been a fan of Harry Potter for quite some years now. I enjoy reading and writing fanfiction as well as drawing fanart.


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Reviews by MacBeth13
All I Want for Christmas by saraek Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Who knew Harry had such a fetish for elves?
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley
Genres: Erotica, PWP, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1797 Read Count: 2602
[Report This] Published: 09/21/2005 Updated: 09/21/2005
Reviewer: MacBeth13 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/07/2009 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Oh my goodness was that fun! Well written one-shot.  The funny thing about having to wear those elf costumes is that the kids find it fun and the guys find it naughty and it's a weird thing to balance that out and not feel horrible (yup, I had to wear the outfit once or twice complete with curly-toed jingle bell shoes). I never had as much fun with it that you have Harry and Ginny having but thanks for letting your readers live vivaciously through your story. Love it! Splendid job!

The Game by Bluerain Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Fed up with her husband, Cho seeks out his sister for some understanding and ends up discovering much more. WARNING! Femslash Ginny/Cho pairing.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Ladies Room
Characters: None
Genres: Erotica
Time Period: None
Warnings: FemSlash, Slash
Series: More Than Memories
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3523 Read Count: 2530
[Report This] Published: 10/04/2005 Updated: 10/04/2005
Reviewer: MacBeth13 Signed
Date: 05/01/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Out take

Oh my goodness, I love it! Ginny is so wicked, it's great. "Now you know what she tastes like" best line ever! I can just picture Harry's stunned face. Really nice outtake from MTM's.

More Than Memories by Bluerain Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 499]
Summary: Past Featured StoryA night that starts out inflicting the pain and horror of war ends in a way Ron had never expected. A story of love that stands the test of time, and of a passion undeniable, even in the face of heart-wrenching betrayal. Written pre-HBP and is now AU :)
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: More Than Memories
Chapters: 26 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 122649 Read Count: 273342
[Report This] Published: 10/06/2005 Updated: 06/12/2009
Reviewer: MacBeth13 Signed
Date: 04/29/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I got pointed in the direction of this story by the talented lilywmw.  Your writing is brilliantly descriptive. Good start to a story that I know is going to be a great read based upon all the good reviews I've heard.

Reviewer: MacBeth13 Signed
Date: 04/29/2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

This is by far one of the best stories I have read in a long time. The plot is so deeply intrigueing and, goodness, but you know how to turn up the heat! Your writing just keeps pulling me in, I've read 12 chapters in one afternoon. Really top notch!

Reviewer: MacBeth13 Signed
Date: 04/30/2009 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

I can't belive I'm all caught up. Your writing is wonderful and richly detailed. It's no wonder that Lily chose your work as a source of inspiration.

Your characterization of the Weasley boys is spot on. I love how you have them all interacting with each other, true family dynamics at it's best (I would know I'm the youngest of seven children). Christmas is sure to be a circus!

Really great job on this. I can't wait until your next update. I'm so glad Lily and her lovely artwork led me to this story. You really have a knack for bringing all the right emotions and feelings to the surface. I wish I could find the right words to appropriately express how much I am loving this story but my words fall short. Absolutely, jaw droppingly, amazing work! Cheers!

--Mac

Reviewer: MacBeth13 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/12/2009 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25

I got home from a long day at work to find you had updated and it totally made my day brighter! I can't wait to see how things will progress in this story, I've had my fingers crossed for ages that you had not given up on this story! I absolutely love Lily's work, it's what sent me here to read your story. She is amazing as are you for being such a wonderful source of inspiration. Your characters are so alive and rich and your words flow so wonderfully on the page that the reader can really immerse themselves into the story. Hope to see updates soon!

Reviewer: MacBeth13 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/30/2010 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

Another incredibly wonderful chapter. The stag do was hilarious! I was laughing so much I had tears in my eyes at the antics they got up to in the game. The Ron and Hermione scene the next morning was so hot that it went beyond steam to vapourizing. The ending is so touching, Ron is so damn adorable when he's romantic and loving. Anxiously awaiting the next chapter! This story is wonderful! --Mac

Baking Biscuits With Hermione by emmilyne Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary: After three years of war, Hermione just wanted a nice, normal, peaceful Christmas, starting with baking biscuits the way she did when she was a child. Her mother’s lack of faith in her baking abilities was not going to deter her and a surprise visit from her boyfriend was not going to distract her. She was going to bake those ruddy biscuits if she had to burn the house down in the process. After all, how hard could it be? Just a sugar-sweet bit of Christmas fluff with a sprinkle of smut. *complete*
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8602 Read Count: 2504
[Report This] Published: 06/13/2006 Updated: 06/13/2006
Reviewer: MacBeth13 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/09/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm not sure what more I can say other than I loved this story 100%! Truly bery enjoyable.  The poem your husband wrote to fit in as a Wizard's traditional proposal was beautiful! Really, really great job!

A Story, an Advice, a Decision by spidergirl Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Written for the Ron/Hermione MovieQuote!Fic Challenge.

“My husband and I fell in love at first sight... maybe I should have taken a second look.” -- Crimes and Misdemeanors

A sad story provokes thinking. An unexpected advice provokes a reaction.

A wise decision provokes real feelings.

During the Horcrux hunt, Ron makes a decision that will change his life.

Ship: Ron & Hermione
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4486 Read Count: 1487
[Report This] Published: 02/13/2007 Updated: 02/15/2007
Reviewer: MacBeth13 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/16/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, that was a really sweet and touching story. I like how you added to Madam Pince's backstory.  Her tale is so sad but also bittersweet.  Ron finally plucking up the courage to tell, well actually show, Hermione how he felt was a great moment. Nicely done!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review!

So glad you liked it!

;)

A New Everything by humantales Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Three years after the War, Harry decides to start the New Year with a surprise. DH spoilers
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Genres: Fluff
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1905 Read Count: 1752
[Report This] Published: 12/13/2007 Updated: 12/14/2007
Reviewer: MacBeth13 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/13/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really good story. I was looking for a Ginny/Harry pairing with a good feeling to it and this story definitely was that and more.  You did wonderfully on showing Harry's nervousness before hand.  I thought your vision for Hermione was spot on, your descriptions for her were perfect.  Little Teddy was a nice touch. Great job on this one! 

--Mac



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and that the characters read "right" to you (always the most difficult part).  Who can resist Teddy?

Thanks for your review!

Picking It Up by hglovesrw Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 17]
Summary: We all know that Ginny and Harry get their happy ending. This is the story of how they go from broken children of war to the people they want to be.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity, The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Erotica, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Masturbation, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Underage
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 43283 Read Count: 11734
[Report This] Published: 04/02/2009 Updated: 06/27/2009
Reviewer: MacBeth13 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 05/08/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Falling Back Into You

Wow, that was a really good first chapter, it was a really great chapter period, actually. The flow was great and your ability to draw out the right emotions is wonderful. I think it was a good decision to have them wait in the physical aspect of their relationship intil they heal. I think it was cute the way you had Ginny remember the little things like how Harry liked to sleep without a shirt and how she took enjoyment out of the smell of him when he is freshly showered. I really liked how you added that bit about Harry smelling that flowery scent on ginny that he smelled in the Amortentia. Really good job!

Reviewer: MacBeth13 Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 05/15/2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Price of Purchase

another great chapter! I loved the idea of swimming in the pond at the Burrow. It was nice the see Harry and Ron horsing around and acting juvenile for a bit. I think they both need that, especially Harry.  I think that you have the characters moving their relationship along at a pace that's right for them. You had a few typos but nothing too bad, just some missing letters and word switches. They don't detract away from the story too much. I can't wait to see what the girls will wear to the ball! I think the awards ceremony is a brilliant idea! Great job!

--Mac 



Author's Response: Thank you very much. It was a fun.hard chapter to right.