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A Bright Cold Day in April by Amanuensis Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary: Past Featured StoryIt's a bad time to be in love.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Ladies Room
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ginny Weasley
Genres: Darkfic
Time Period: None
Warnings: FemSlash, Non-Con, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6932 Read Count: 11944
[Report This] Published: 03/08/2007 Updated: 03/08/2007
Reviewer: saheed Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/15/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow. So powerful!

"Like a Sister" by Leviathan Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstar [Reviews - 35]
Summary: After Ron has left them, the Horcrux works on Hermione and Harry.

Takes place between Chapters 15 and 16 of Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows
Categories: The Broomshed > Dark Side
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger
Genres: Angst, Darkfic, Erotica
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1939 Read Count: 28043
[Report This] Published: 08/19/2007 Updated: 08/19/2007
Reviewer: saheed Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/15/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Dear god! That was great--and I personally always thought those two would be a much better couple than Ron & Hermione.

Author's Response: Well, given that this encounter is spiteful and nasty and caused by mental manipulations by a part of Tom Riddle's twisted soul, I don't think it says much for their long-term compatibility, but I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

Second Trimester by TheTrioMakesMeHot Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 61]
Summary:

~~SEQUEL TO TEN WEEKS~~ (Ten Weeks is short; you may want to read it first)
The Trio are forced to deal with repressed sexual attraction that began to surface in the unlikeliest of circumstances.            NOTE: This fic is still unfinished.  At first, I was delayed because of a career change  that came with an hour's commute in each direction, but the delay is currently due to the nature of the story itself.   I can't explain here as it will ruin the story, but I will add a note at the end of Chapter 9 explaining it.  I DO intend to finish this at some point, and it will be posted here, at LJ and at AO3 once I do.  I just can't say right now how long before I am able to focus on this one.


Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room, The Broomshed > Self Pleasure, The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings, The Broomshed > Ménage a Trio
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Trio
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Het, Masturbation, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 22699 Read Count: 29303
[Report This] Published: 10/17/2007 Updated: 07/08/2010
Reviewer: saheed Signed
Date: 04/30/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Damn, what's wrong with me?

Glad to see this story continued! Looking forward to the rest! One quick grammar note: the past tense of drag is "dragged" (not "drug"--you've used it incorrectly in several chapters now).



Author's Response: Glad you're glad!  I'm trying to tweak the next chapter a bit and hope to have it up in a few days.  Thanks for the grammar catch!  I only found where I'd used it twice, and I've changed those.  If you know of others, I'd be most grateful if you sent me a message pointing them out directly so I could fix those as well. 

A Heart So Ravenous by Slashpervert Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary: Draco and Harry continue to recover from past ordeals as they work on building their lives together. Draco tries to find a way to please both his parents and his lover, but with dangerous consequences. Will their love survive what he has done? Sequel to A Love So Belated.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room, The Broomshed > The Dungeon
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, EWE, Graphic Violence, Hurt/Comfort, M-Preg, Masturbation, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 44 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 118226 Read Count: 57007
[Report This] Published: 04/22/2008 Updated: 05/04/2008
Reviewer: saheed Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 09/21/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Dreadful

As usual, a wonderful novel-length tale from you! I hope the third story is no longer stalled, because I am definitely looking forward to it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I've got a couple more to post too. Just loaded the next this evening.

More Time by Pamey Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

It's been 5 years after the Dark Lord has fallen. Though the war took a heavy toll on all, it ultimately took the heaviest toll on heroes Harry Potter and Hermione Granger. But a simple chance of fate crosses the path of two intertwined people that may change the course of their lives in ways they never thought possible.


Categories: Hallowed Halls > Golden Trio
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6318 Read Count: 1289
[Report This] Published: 09/09/2009 Updated: 02/07/2010
Reviewer: saheed Signed
Date: 09/22/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Really interesting idea! One grammar point: it should be "Together, SHE and (Bill, Harry, etc.)" You're mixing subject and object pronouns otherwise. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: yes thank you for pointing that out! very silly mistake of me, I was just typing it so fast I must have missed it

Reconstructing Draco by deenas Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Draco's life is not what he had imagined it to be. Change comes in unexpected ways.

Author's Note: Yes, I am writing Draco. In a romantic lead, something I never thought I would do. Please give this a chance and tell me what you think. I have a whole big story in mind here, so please don't leave.


Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Blaise Zabini, Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drama, General, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 20384 Read Count: 2522
[Report This] Published: 09/10/2009 Updated: 02/09/2010
Reviewer: saheed Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/16/2009 Title: Chapter 1: First Contact

Very interesting--normally I'm an H/D fan, but this is a fascinating story. Great idea, too--very original.

And You Will Have Me Live by Seraphime Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 35]
Summary: Pansy Parkinson's life had been set in stone since she was a little girl with no hope of it ever changing. However a chance meeting on Christmas Day with Ron Weasley changes everything for better and for worse.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Draco Malfoy, George Weasley, Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Angst, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Het, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 92518 Read Count: 9518
[Report This] Published: 09/18/2009 Updated: 09/30/2010
Reviewer: saheed Signed
Date: 10/02/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is a really engaging story--I keep reading it despite my relative loathing of both Ron and Pansy, which should tell you just how interesting it is. However, you need some beta assistance. For example, in this paragraph, I've corrected several errors:

Harry and someone from the Department of Magical Law Enforcement where were suppose supposed to meet her in her lab to discuss her findings in the continued investigation of the re-emergence of the Walpurgis Knights that had began with that blasted Christmas raid which had changed her life. Though the investigation slowly had been picking up steam over the past few months and her role was unfortunately becoming more and more vital, she was still hoping that she would be able to stay discretely discreetly within the background as the investigation continued. 

There are a number of others (e.g. "shown" instead of "shone" and "Stopped in his tracts" instead of "stopped in his tracks," using the wrong "to," etc.). It is distracting to read a good story undermined by poor grammar, spelling, and punctuation. More proofreading would be a help.

 



Author's Response: I actually do work with a beta. Unfortunately, neither her nor I are perfect and sometimes don't catch everything. I am glad to hear that you are enjoying this story though.

Getting Away with Murder by Leigh Adams Rated: MT - Mature Themes [Reviews - 2]
Summary: A murder is committed at a Ministry gala and despite a confession, Ron knows who really did it.
Categories: Dark Tales > Slytherin Common Room
Characters: Pansy Parkinson, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drama
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Angst, Het, Love/Hate
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2066 Read Count: 455
[Report This] Published: 09/12/2010 Updated: 09/13/2010
Reviewer: saheed Signed
Date: 09/19/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Yes, this is a perfect story--Ron would be the type to be a cheating bastard, especially since he married a woman vastly superior to himself, and then would be too weak to handle the consequences. Excellent job characterizing Ron as the loser that he truly is.

Scratching the Surface by luvscharlie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Millie's not your ordinary girl, but Charlie finds that if you scratch the surface, there's a bit more to her.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Charlie Weasley, Millicent Bulstrode
Genres: Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Love/Hate, Masturbation, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13868 Read Count: 785
[Report This] Published: 10/08/2010 Updated: 10/08/2010
Reviewer: saheed Signed
Date: 10/18/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story about two totally unexpected characters!

Summary: The Mirror of Erised shows not your face, but your heart’s desire. Over the years, many people have found themselves staring into the glass.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > From Diagon Alley to Hogwarts, Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast, Bad Moon Rising > School Days, Dark Tales > Going Under
Characters: Bellatrix Lestrange, Lily Evans Potter, Lily Potter, Petunia Dursley, Severus Snape, Sirius Black, Theodore Lupin
Genres: Angst, Ficlet, General
Time Period: Next Generation, Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Angst, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, Strong Language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1021 Read Count: 602
[Report This] Published: 11/02/2010 Updated: 11/07/2010
Reviewer: saheed Signed
Date: 11/07/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Turn when you cannot see the truth here inside of me

Excellent and touching (except Bellatrix's--but hers is good nonetheless) drabbles!

Summary: Ron wonders why Harry is taking so long in the shower.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Drabbles
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 306 Read Count: 1044
[Report This] Published: 12/28/2010 Updated: 01/06/2011
Reviewer: saheed Signed
Date: 01/06/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hilarious! Ron is such a prig.

Tonight, Open your Eyes by EruditeWitch Rated: RT - Restricted Themes [Reviews - 2]
Summary: They met painfully, and separated easily.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Charlie Weasley, Millicent Bulstrode
Genres: Angst
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Character Death, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9017 Read Count: 631
[Report This] Published: 02/02/2011 Updated: 02/02/2011
Reviewer: saheed Signed
Date: 02/09/2011 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I am really enjoyig this pairing, oddly enough. Thank you! I liked the hint of H/D, too. Any chance of explanding that to match this?

After Breakfast by Northumbrian Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

The Wedding Breakfast of Mr and Mrs Ronald B Weasley is now over. It is time for the speeches. Ron's best man gets nervously to his feet...


Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: None
Series: Family Matters
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4434 Read Count: 1178
[Report This] Published: 09/29/2011 Updated: 11/09/2011
Reviewer: saheed Signed
Date: 11/14/2011 Title: Chapter 1: After Breakfast

Just to clarify, I did not miss the "anvil-sized hints." I knew they would end up together, just as I knew Harry and Ginny would...but that didn't stop me from hoping it wouldn't be so obvious and so trite. Alas, it is not my story. And as I said, your story was very well-written. My comment about "great speeches" was actually about yours, as I thought the speech you gave Harry was quite articulate. (I also admit to cheering at the recent news that JKR almost killed off Ron...so close!)

Author's Response: Saheed
Your “trite” is my “much loved cliché”. JKR fills her story with them. IMO there is little more clichéd than Ginny running after the Hogwarts express waving in PS, or her shyness, clumsiness and subsequent rescue by Harry in CoS.
And I prove that I still can’t spot a compliment when I see one. Thanks. I hope that the speech was as articulate as Harry could manage. It was deliberately rambling and occasionally nostalgic, but then Harry isn’t a great and witty public speaker.
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Reviewer: saheed Signed
Date: 11/11/2011 Title: Chapter 1: After Breakfast

Very well written story. I really liked the Harry-Ginny interaction. For the life of me, however, I will never understand why an accomplished witch like Hermione would choose such a loser as Ron (ugly, poor, disloyal, stupid--need I say more?). No great speeches will convince me, either.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
I’m sorry you managed to miss JKR’s “anvil-sized hints”.
I won’t make a great speech. Not all blokes are rich and good looking, I know I’m not. I like to think that we may have other redeeming qualities (and in Ron’s case, so does JKR). I could, but won’t, argue with ugly. Poor should be irrelevant. He’s neither stupid nor disloyal. He made a mistake, but returned to try to put things right. Something which, I’m certain, Hermione has the brains to recognise.
I’m canon to the core and all of my stories fit into one complicated timeline. Most of my stories are Harry/Ginny, with a smattering of Ron/Hermione. I will also admit to an unhealthy obsession with Lavender Brown. You have been warned :-D
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