Penname: Leviathan [Contact] Real name: Jonathan Andrew Sheen
Member Since: 06/10/2006
Membership status: Administrator
Bio:
I live in Pepperell, Massachusetts, USA.
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http://leviathan0999.livejournal.com/

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Sunday Morning by leelastarsky Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary: It may have taken Ron until fourth year to realise Hermione was a girl, but when did Hermione realise Ron was a man?
Categories: Hallowed Halls > From Diagon Alley to Hogwarts
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2327 Read Count: 697
[Report This] Published: 05/09/2006 Updated: 05/09/2006
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed
Date: 08/27/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is just adorable. The banter between Harry and Ron is first-rate, the comfort between the three ofthem as friends is wonderful.

Hesitation by modestyrabnott Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 119]
Summary: If one hesitates in his path, let him not proceed. Let him respect his doubts, for doubts, too, may have some divinity in them. - Henry David Thoreau

For years, I waited, wondered and wished for the day when he'd finally set things in motion.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: OC
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42512 Read Count: 27139
[Report This] Published: 07/30/2006 Updated: 02/18/2007
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/26/2006 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh, this piece is just tearing my heart out. Look, you can borrow my Empty Universe from "Wnwinnavle Fight" for asd long as it takes. Chuck 'em in, and leave 'em in until they just pull those sticks out and frikkin' talk to one another!

Fool's Paradise by mapleandmahogany Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary: Ron experiences a magical fantasy.
Categories: The Broomshed > Ménage a Trio
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, PWP, Trio
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het, Masturbation, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2006-08) August Challenge: The Anything Goes Challenge
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2006-08) August Challenge: The Anything Goes Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2351 Read Count: 3508
[Report This] Published: 08/22/2006 Updated: 08/22/2006
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/23/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice! "Ain't nothing liek teh Real Thing, baby," asthe song says.

This is lovely and hot.


Author's Response: I appreciate that, thank you!

Wake Me by risiepookie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 173]
Summary: In the midst of the War, Hermione is kidnapped and held captive as Ron, Harry and Ginny search desperately for her. Hermione and Ron share a psychic connection, with which she tries to help him find her before it is too late.

A strong warning for this story, as it does contain the rape of a character and severe psychological trauma.

*This is the first story in my Awakenings Series*
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Darkfic, Drama, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Het, Rape, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 52346 Read Count: 16358
[Report This] Published: 08/23/2006 Updated: 08/23/2007
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/24/2007 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Slipping Further Away

I am completely blown away by this fic.

Your fearlessness is stunning, and your willingness and ability to "go there" adn not pull back from the horrors is something I thoroughly admire.

I'm not wild about your additions to the Sixth-Year relationship, although I understood the functional need for those scenes with the Death Eater.

But that's a tiny cavill compared to the awesome power of this story. I am stunned beyond the ability to describe.


Author's Response:

Hi my cuddly friend! 

 Wow, I can’t being to tell you about the surge of happiness that flowed through me in seeing that you not only read this fic, but you are connecting with it!  ::squee:: 

Your compliments warm me thoroughly, as I did have some doubts about the depths I went to in this chapter, knowing it might turn a lot of people away.  I’m so glad you made it through and you weren’t turned off by how dark it got. 

As for the additions to the 6th year relationship, I consciously decided to change the frame a bit, even though it’s somewhat out of canon.  I needed something for the scenes with the Death Eater, and to explain their hesitance to show each other their true feelings.  The ultimate reasons for the additions will be explored in the upcoming chapters. 

Thanks again for reading and reviewing!  Coming from someone I truly admire, I really appreciate your thoughts and support, and am very flattered by them.  ::hugs::

*yummy crème brulee for you, my dear friend*

Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/26/2007 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Barely Breathing

Oh, this hurts, so, so much.

It's going to be a long, hard road for Hermione to come back from this... But with Friends and love like Harry and Ginny and Ron, I'm confident she will.


Author's Response:

Hi honey!  Squee for your review!  Thanks so much for your thoughts, as always!  Yes, it's going to be a very long road to recovery for all involved, but it's not impossible and they'll all make it. Thanks again!

*chocolate satin pie for you*

Reviewer: Leviathan Signed
Date: 09/26/2007 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Finally Woken

This is so heartwarming and heartbreaking at the same time.

I'm a little bothered that Healer!Neville is over-ruling his patient. I know it happens in real medical and therapeutic situations,  but I expect better of Neville than that. Ah, well!

 

It's so good to see Ron and Hermione finally building a relationship based on their real feelings, and daunting to get a glimpse of how long and rocky the road ahead of them will be.



Author's Response:

Finally back to the internets and able to respond!  Thank you so much, my dear friend, for the lovely review and the phone chat re: this chapter.  I really appreciate being able to hear your thoughts and perspective on the chapter and the direction the fic is taking.  Your opinions mean a lot to me. 

Yep, the road is long and hard, but at least they have the chance to walk it.  More development on that path to come soon!  Thanks again!  *cinnamon bun for you* 

If a Man Answers by risiepookie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 218]
Summary: When Ron comes back after two years, he dreads another man answering Hermione's door in the middle of the night. He certainly didn't expect the other man to be Harry. Jealousy, sex, betrayal, confusion, and heartache ensue.  Unfortunately, all is not as it should be and Ron must survive the unexpected consequences of his return, including broken relationships and promises.

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Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 40051 Read Count: 29776
[Report This] Published: 08/27/2006 Updated: 04/21/2008
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/23/2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Memories of a Lifetime Ago

Ron, do you remember the first time you met the wealthy, famous, legendary Boy-Who-Lived? Remember what you did? You gave him half your sandwich. You're strong, Ron. You're strong enough to share.

Oh, I hope he realizes it, before it's too late!

This is such an amazing story! I'm really loving it.


Author's Response:

Leviathan!!!  I feel so honoured that you read my fic!  I can't even begin to tell you the excitement I got when I saw that it was you reviewing!  :o) 

I, too, think my Ron has a lot to learn from your Ron- but it's hard to say when he'll truly get the point, you know?  Sharing is caring, but will he learn that?  Well, I know the answer, but everyone else has to wait. 

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR REVIEWING!  Truly, it gives me such a self-esteem boost to know that you are enjoying it!  ::giant hugs::

*yummy chocolate covered toffees to share with your wife*

Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/09/2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - A Real Homecoming

Oh, God, poor Ron!

I really want to see him, Hermione and Harry find some way to work this out. 

You know my tastes, and you know my solution.

I don't know if that can work for your Ron. But I hope he can continue to hold onto his love for Harry, and I hope, however their relationships work out, they can live with their decisions, and come back to the friendship that defines them.


Author's Response:

I know, he really is getting dragged through the ringer, isn't he?  In the end, there needs to be a resolution, because the three of them have been each other's everything for so long- it would be just wrong to have it any other way.  But, there's a long road ahead of them.  Unfortunately, I don't think my Ron can do what your Ron did so generously, but there is hope for the future!

::loves on my Levi::  *delicious almond rocas to you*  

Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/09/2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Rumination

God, this chapter is so lyrical, so healing.

It's an interesting question Ron asks Ginny in the end though: "Ginny, do you ever honestly believe it will go back to how it was?" My question is, should it go back to how it was? How it was didn't work. How it was ended in heartbreak and Ron leaving. The question is, Ronnie, Can it ever get to how it should be?

You know me. I say that's Trio. But even if it's H/G an dR/Hr, it can't, it shouldn't, it mustn't be the way it was.

It has to be better. It has to be whole. Otherwise, it's nothing.




Author's Response:

You are so kind and lovely to me, my dear friend! 

I agree, Ron's question is very interesting and I also agree that it's the wrong question to be asking.  Clearly, something major wasn't working, for everything to have gone so completely sour.  We are both about ten steps ahead of Ron though, because he's still not there developmentally- he can't yet see that different can be better and stronger.

I think the best advice for Ron is what Molly said: the problem is with the four of them, and you can bet the solution is with the four of them as well.  They can't go back, nor should they, but they can move forward into something healing and wonderful, if they're willing to fall the final distance. 

Thank you again, so very much, for your lovely review!  It's always such a boost to my self-esteem to hear from you!  ::hugs::

*coconut macaroons for you* 

Reviewer: Leviathan Signed
Date: 10/31/2007 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - The Question Game

Lovely, lovely chapter, insightful and painful and still funny, a very difficult combination to pull off. The part I'm really waiting for, of course, is the after-dinner conversation/confrontation. I really want to see and understand more of Harry's and Hermione's side of this whole thing, and I want to see them start to build their own pathway out of their pain. I'd love to see it be with an unconventional solution, however that would work, but most of all, I want to see them start to move forward again. Ron's taken his gut-punch, and he's been taken to his knees by it, but he wouldn't be Ron Weasley if he stayed there. Ron Weasley picks up his head and goes forward.

Author's Response: Hello my dear!  Thank you so much for the truly lovely review- I'm all a-tingle from it.  :o)  Also, thank you for the really wonderful chat we had this afternoon about it- helped me to get my own thoughts my organized.  As you know, the conversation is not the next chapter, but it's definitely the one after that.  Ron's got a bit to process in the next chapter before the dinner confrontation.  No worries, Ron won't be stuck on his knees for long- he's too strong for that!  Thank you again, love.  *yummy chocolate dipped biscotti for you*

Reviewer: Leviathan Signed
Date: 04/23/2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Immersion

This is a lovely chapter. Ron's hurt is so raw and open, and the beginnings of his healing with his family is quite touching. I can't wait to see teh conversation that has to follow. 

Author's Response: Thank you, sweetie, for such lovely and wonderful words.  It's always very exciting for me to hear what you think about new chapters and I'm so glad to know you enjoyed this one!  Thanks for your support on it and the reassurance early on in this chapter.  ::hugs::  *ginger snaps for you*

Cake by Mad Maudlin Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Hermione is a greedy girl
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Golden Trio
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Romance, Trio
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Het, Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4579 Read Count: 1582
[Report This] Published: 09/03/2006 Updated: 09/03/2006
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed
Date: 10/20/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Cake

I'm stunned and deeply disappointed in myself that I've never left you a review on this story. It's such a powerhouse, with such a wonderful emotional ending. Trio can't help but lead to thoughts of Pervy Three-Way Sex ([tm] Argyle_S) but you never let us forget that this story is all about the love.

All about the love. Oh, God, yes.

Eventually by Mad Maudlin Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Waking up is hard to do.

Categories: Remains of the Day > Three of Hearts
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Fluff, Trio
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het, Major Fluff, Slash, Threesome
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 974 Read Count: 1095
[Report This] Published: 09/06/2006 Updated: 09/06/2006
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/08/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Eventually

How can it be that I've never told you how much I love this
vignette? Oh, more than I can say, do I love this, this slow
coming to awareness, these flashes of memory, and the 
love, so much love.

Hallway Scene by Mad Maudlin Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: You never know...

Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Major Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1597 Read Count: 902
[Report This] Published: 09/07/2006 Updated: 09/08/2006
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/16/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Hallway Scene

OK, I always have to "swallow a lump" of plot when Ron steps gallantly aside for Harry, but the quality of your writing made that lump go down smooth. 

The interplay between Harry and Hermione, that moment of recognition when Harry catches Hermione from falling. The fact that, if Ron were to step aside for Harry, he'd do it exactly like that...

Great, great story!


Thoughts Get In The Way II by alloy Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: A lack of satisfaction in the Marital Bed leaves Ron Weasley wanting to chuck it in. How will Hermione take that?
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het, Love/Hate, Masturbation, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2039 Read Count: 2211
[Report This] Published: 09/11/2006 Updated: 09/11/2006
Reviewer: Leviathan Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 09/11/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Thoughts Get In The Way

Wow. That's as hot as a punch in the gut, and I mean that in an entirely good way.

Author's Response: Thank you, I understand what you meant.