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BONDED by rosepddle Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 74]
Summary: The bonds of friendship, love and family are strong, but can they survive evil, especially when that evil is coming from a familiar place?

This story takes place one year after Four Days of Fantasies. While this can be enjoyed on it's own, reading FDoF may help to make sense of some information in Bonded and it would sure put a smile on my face!
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Darkfic, Drama, Mystery
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Het, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence
Series: Bonded
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 87200 Read Count: 11943
[Report This] Published: 12/14/2006 Updated: 03/25/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/17/2007 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Bonding

Oh my gosh that was just incredible! And sooo hot and steamy. Your love/sex scenes never cease to amaze me. And as much as I love all of JK's other characters, I'm just soo happy to see that this story focused on the four of them. It was simply beautiful. Now that I have read all three stories in the series I find that I'm anxious for more! Are you planning on writing anything else in this universe? This was really a fantastic and wonderfully written story.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for that fantastic review! Unfortunately, I will be taking a break from fan fiction to focus on my original work, so Transitions will be my last story in the fandom world for a while. Sorry.

Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 08/06/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Not Long Enough

Hi it's me again. LoL. I just wanted to let you know that I rec'd your Bonded series on my LJ. Is that OK?

Author's Response: Hi Tart, that\'s fine that you rec\'d the series. I really appreiciate it...thanks!

The Glass Onion by mapleandmahogany Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 142]
Summary: Past Featured StoryThe war against Voldemort has just ended, and Lee has been attacked and hexed while minding the joke shop for the Twins. The near loss of his friend makes George face his feelings.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: George Weasley, Lee Jordan
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Frottage, Masturbation, Minor Fluff, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 50 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45552 Read Count: 45895
[Report This] Published: 01/12/2007 Updated: 11/12/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 09/05/2007 Title: Chapter 38: 38. Virgin

I know I reviewed every chapter over at your LJ but I'm just so in love with it I feel the need to gush some more LoL. Especially about:

 “Oh fuck!” he shouted, in a way that was more ‘what the?’ than ‘me harder!’. Something felt like it was burning up and melting deep on the inside. He arched and clenched and grasped at Lee’s thigh.

“That feels good, right?” Lee asked, his thrusts still slow and even. “That’s the magic spot, you always find it for me.”

“Oh, Merlin. … This is what you feel?”

*melts*

and also:

George’s attention was shot. He was exhausted between the remnants of a crying headache and the enticing, despoiled feeling in his well-fucked arse. The thought made him smile and nearly gave him the giggles as a final tension release.

Like I said before, soooo worth the wait :o)



Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the 'what the' than 'me harder' line! I was so proud of that. *is a dork* Thank you!!! :D

Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 04/10/2007 Title: Chapter 21: 21. Mask

Ahhhhhh lovely! Good Lord, you make me melt, you write the two of them with such heat. Love those boys. *sighs dreamily*

Author's Response: I have really come to love these boys too! And I never knew I would. Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: Tart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/09/2007 Title: Chapter 24: 24. Naked

Yay! LOVE Rocky Horror!

Oh those boys.... Hmmm Lee in a leather kilt... Delicious.

Awww you always make me smile!



Author's Response: I recently saw a leather kilt that I found rather inspiring - and very practical in this case :P Thank you!!

Reviewer: Tart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/27/2007 Title: Chapter 27: 27. Kitchen

Yay! I was so excited to the update, I've missed these two!

“I can’t,” George sighed. “We’re stuck with him.”

That made me laugh! And I loved Lee's trickery on poor unsuspecting Fred. LoL

 Another great chapter!

 



Author's Response:

I'm excited that you're excited! Thank you so much for reading!

Fred is such an arse, I loved giving Lee the chance to get one over on him. Thank you!!

Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 08/28/2007 Title: Chapter 32: 32. Writing

Ohhhhhh I was so glad to see the updates! Fantastic.

See what a little bit of jealousy can do? Can't wait for the next installments!



Author's Response: Yay! Jealousy works both ways, doesn't it? :P Thank you!

Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 10/01/2007 Title: Chapter 41: 41. Journal

LoL Maple. Now I remember your random questions about how long is a chicken's average lifespan. And looking up different phobias. Makes sense now. that was funny. LoL.

Author's Response: See - stick with me long enough and my mania begins to make sense! :P

Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 10/30/2007 Title: Chapter 46: 46. Future

Guh! Oh my sweet Merlin this just killed me:

“I’m sorry,” he reached up and pulled Lee down to meet his lips in a kiss. “I promise a future of better memories. I’ll make it up to you.”

Whew! When the boys are hot, they are HOT. Even with no "smut", they still amaze me. Well done!




Author's Response: I love that you think its hot without smut. Man, I'm almost 'smutted out' - almost!

Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 10/31/2007 Title: Chapter 48: 48. Good

Naughty, naughty! I love it! I adore George. And it was so sweet the way he bonded with his niece. He's going to be her favorite uncle. LoL. Well done!

Author's Response: *beams* Thank you, sweet thing! I enjoyed the idea of George going all goo-goo face for a baby. :P

Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 11/12/2007 Title: Chapter 50: 50. Commitment

Well dang Maple! Now you have ME crying! And don't go wishing you could have done it bigger-better! It's absolutely perfect the way it is. I've loved every single chapter of these boys. It's lovely.

I'm also sad that we no longer have a pre-DH world to play in but hey that's what AU is for, right? LoL.

Thank you soooo much for sharing all 50 of these with us, I've loved them all.



Author's Response: lol - I have been ridiculously choked up over this over the past few days! heh. Thank you so much. I tend to have much grander ideas in my head than I'm able to convey on paper so I'm always left feeling disappointed with the end product. But it's been very fun and I've been thrilled with the adventure of it. Thank you so much for reading along the way - you've been fun! :)

Someone to Watch Over Me by simons_flower Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: When Harry Potter returns after fifteen years with few explanations as to his whereabouts, Hermione Granger isn't exactly overjoyed to see him.  At first.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter
Genres: Drama, Erotica, Mystery
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Het, Strong Language
Series: Harry Potter ABCs, The Protector
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13725 Read Count: 1158
[Report This] Published: 01/13/2007 Updated: 01/13/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 05/23/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Someone to Watch Over Me

I really liked this but I was just curious about what Ron's reaction would/will be. Do you plan on writing anything about it?

Great story!



Author's Response: Thanks!

I'm in the process of writing a companion fic from Harry's POV.  I'm not sure yet if Ron will ever find out -- haven't thought that far ahead yet :)

Nothing Left Between by Rickey_A Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 13]
Summary: Post War. Harry/Ron. They’re 18. Harry decides that it’s time to come out to his closest friends and gets a little help from a new friend. Of course it’s Ron that he’s holding a torch for.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drama, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: OC
Series: Nothing Left Between
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8598 Read Count: 2504
[Report This] Published: 01/24/2007 Updated: 01/25/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 02/28/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was absolutely fantastic. You really have a wonderful gift, being able to convey emotions so beautifully. I liked that it took a total stranger with no knowledge of Harry's life, to make him see what he had to do. Ryan was very likeable. And the passion was very steamy. Just what I'd expect from our boys. Wonderful writing!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. You are most generous. It\'s daunting to use an OC, but I felt that I really needed to in this story. I\'m glad so many people liked Ryan.

My Yesterday's In Front of Me by tqpannie Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Harry finds Ron.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Drabbles
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drabble
Time Period: None
Warnings: Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 234 Read Count: 207
[Report This] Published: 02/09/2007 Updated: 02/09/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/24/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww that was so briiliant and warm! I loved it.

Pants at Romance by Rickey_A Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: It stands on its own, but in my head it takes place after Nothing Left Between. If you haven’t read it, just know that they got together a few months post war in the fall of their 18th year after a bit of angst and doubt of each other’s true feelings. Their first Valentine’s Day together approaches and they’ve been together a few months. (Per the Master Timeline - Feb 99)
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: Nothing Left Between
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2125 Read Count: 1396
[Report This] Published: 02/23/2007 Updated: 02/24/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03/02/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Love, love loved it! I adore the way you write Harry and Ron. Brilliant!

Author's Response: Gosh thanks so much. I truly appreciate the feedback.