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That Which Divides Us by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Summary: Three years after what would have been their seventh year at Hogwarts the war grinds on between the forces of light and Voldemort’s minions. But even within the ranks of the Order there are vast disagreements over what is good for the ‘chosen one’ and his volatile relationship with Draco Malfoy has many on edge. Sometimes even the best intentions can reap disaster.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Action/Adventure, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125762 Read Count: 25681
[Report This] Published: 08/18/2007 Updated: 10/11/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 08/22/2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh and  forgot to add that the picture in my mind that you painted of Harry coming into the kitchen, geared for battle and so determined.... Positively edible.

Author's Response: Yeah.  Yummm, huh?  I kinda got off on that myself.

Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 08/22/2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ohhhhhh you know most of the time I really, truly love Hermione but I cannot believe she did that and I hope she feels horribly, terribly guilty!

 *sigh*

I know, I know, she did it out of love for Harry and to protect him and all that but OH MY GOD! This is just heart wrenching!

Gaahhhhhhhh!

They must find each other again, they simply must!

Seriously, the only thing that's keeping me going here is the promise of no holds barred, amazing, incredible, hot and sweaty reunion sex.

*giggle* My goodness, I'm a bit dramatic tonight, aren't I?

Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 08/22/2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ok no ranting this time. I'm pretty sure Hermione feels suitably horrified and now I'm counting on our clever girl to come up with a way to reunite those two. I just hope they forgive her. Harry will I'm sure. Well mostly sure, anyway.

I'm dying to know what Ron's reaction is to her part in the plan. And poor Draco! Just where the heck did they send him, anyway?

How many chapters are planned? Please tell me they won;t be without each other for too long?

*lower lip trembling*

Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 08/22/2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh please, my most lovely storyteller, please tell me it won't be long for an update?

wow I've missed you! I've missed the way your writing always has me begging for more. LoL.

Oh poor Harry, that was just wretched. I would have been crying the whole time I was writing that scene with Remus. Just so heartbreaking. And he wants him in Godric's Hollow with his parents. So sad.

*sniffs*

Well I'm off to bed now in the hopes that my sweet hubby will ..er... cheer me up. *giggle*

Cannot wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response: Well, I hoped that your hubby was able to cheer you up!  And I've missed you!  Your reviews are always so much fun.  It was sad to write; I did tear up, I admit it.  And you know me, I put them through alot before I 'save' them! 

Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 08/26/2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

‘Beloved, wait for me…’

Oh my gosh I just got goosebumps! *shivers* So tragic.

Ohhhhh I want Draco to remember and I want Harry to find out and I want Hermione to admit everything and I want hot passionate reunion sex and..and..and

Well I'm not sure what else, but I'll settle for an update. LoL

Hurry, Hurry! *blows kisses*



Author's Response: I love your reviews; you're so enthusiastic it makes my day!  and I promise to deliver on your list...at least part of it!  Love ya!  B.

Breathing Through by mapleandmahogany, Quizzical Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary: Ron held them both, as best he could around her expanded frame, pulling Harry close to Hermione's body. Ron whispered words of support onto her neck, placing kisses behind her earlobe. She arched her head back, letting herself drown in their touch.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Three of Hearts
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Trio
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Het, OC, Slash, Threesome
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7039 Read Count: 5373
[Report This] Published: 08/31/2007 Updated: 08/31/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 08/31/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Breathing Through

Oh that was just wonderful! I haven't read any other stories in this series but I definitely will now. It was beautiful!

Author's Response:

We appreciate that! (maple says; yes, do read the series, it's thoughtful and clever and lovely) Thank you!

~M and Q 

Raising the Dead by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Harry and Ron are working for the Auror’s Department, and while sitting a stake out in an unlikely location, have a meaningful conversation and find a way to pass the time.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, D/S, EWE, Minor Fluff, Public Sex, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5024 Read Count: 1677
[Report This] Published: 09/25/2007 Updated: 09/25/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 09/25/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok I loved it at the challenge and I still love it now! and this is still my favorite line:

Instinctively Harry lifted his hand and clamped it over Ron’s mouth, cutting off the sound and his other arm clamped tight around his chest, holding his heaving body pressed against his own

OMG! *falls over dead*



Author's Response: I can always count on you to make my day.  I love you!!!!

After King's Cross by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 36]
Summary: Past Featured StoryHarry is a feeling a bit melancholy after his boys have left for Hogwarts, but his wife wants his undivided attention.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Genres: Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Minor Fluff, Public Sex, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5615 Read Count: 10224
[Report This] Published: 10/19/2007 Updated: 10/19/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 10/20/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh Barbara you made me cry! Again! LoL.

That was amazing and lovely and exactly how I picture Harry and Ginny, still so much in love and unable to keeps their hands off each other no matter how much time has passed. Just beautiful and HOT.

As much as I adore your H/D, this pairing is what drew me into fandom to begin with and I have a very special place in my heart for these two together.

 And twins.. that's what really got me crying! "Fred and George." I loved Trelawney's prediction! So only to more to go then? LoL.

Thank you so much for a wonderful read, you've made my day :o)



Author's Response: You're welcome, love.  These two were my first favorites too, they were what pulled me in to begin with.  Writing this was fun, and extremely nostalgic for me!  Glad you liked it!

Vengeance is Mine by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Some things are simply unforgiveable.
Categories: Dark Tales > Going Under
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Dudley Dursley, Petunia Dursley, Ron Weasley, Vernon Dursley
Genres: Angst, Darkfic, Drama
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Character Death, Strong Language, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1692 Read Count: 1445
[Report This] Published: 10/30/2007 Updated: 10/30/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 10/30/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Vengeance is Mine

*shivers*

 Bravo! I like vengeful!Draco. Remind me never to get on his bad side, yeah? That was very powerful.



Author's Response: Thanks, love!  I'm glad that you liked this.  And yes, a pissed off Draco is a scary Draco.  Don't you just love him? 

Wednesday Dates by Fizzmonkeys Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Past Featured StoryEven after years of marriage, some of Harry's most treasured times were his dates with Ginny.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Tragedy
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Minor Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3267 Read Count: 1268
[Report This] Published: 11/04/2007 Updated: 11/05/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 11/06/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh that was beautiful! You've got me in tears here. Very well done.

Author's Response: *hugs* Thank you so much. I'm so glad that you liked it.

Love Lies Bleeding by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary: During her sixth year at Hogwarts, Ginny Weasley discovers a spell that allows her to turn a treasured birthday gift into a window on Harry Potter's soul.  What she sees is not what she expected...
Categories: Dark Tales > Going Under
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Genres: Angst, Darkfic, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Tragedy
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Bloodplay, Character Death, EWE, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Masturbation, RST, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Suicide, Voyeurism
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9559 Read Count: 4994
[Report This] Published: 11/17/2007 Updated: 11/17/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 11/21/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh wow! That was just..well heartbreaking. But beautiful. Lovely but sorrowful. Your descriptions were amazing. That last bit, Harry's green eye in the shard of broken mirror was powerful. I suppose Ginny only had herself to blame, she had been warned after all. Her anguish, her obsession was very tangible. Very well done.

Author's Response: Thanks, love!

I Know by Samayel Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Draco finally pushes Harry too far, touching off an encounter that changes everything between them.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Erotica, PWP, Romance
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: BDSM, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Crossdressing, D/S, Dub-Con, Love/Hate, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Violence, Voyeurism
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6145 Read Count: 2600
[Report This] Published: 12/03/2007 Updated: 12/03/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 12/03/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ohhhhh such hotness! That was amazing and sexy and wicked and GUH. Brilliant.

Snowy Night by simons_flower Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 6]
Summary: A little warmth goes a long way on a cold night.
Categories: The Broomshed > Ménage a Trio
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Erotica, PWP, Romance
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Contains Spoilers for DH, Frottage, Het, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4103 Read Count: 3143
[Report This] Published: 12/12/2007 Updated: 12/12/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 12/13/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Snowy Night

Ohhhh that was H.O.T. Lucky girl!

Author's Response: Hee!  Thanks, glad you enjoyed!

Red, Red Wine by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: RT - Restricted Themes [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Harry, Draco and Mulled Wine
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: None
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2007-12) Secret Yule Challenge
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2007-12) Secret Yule Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1013 Read Count: 1789
[Report This] Published: 12/14/2007 Updated: 12/14/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 12/14/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Red, Red Wine

oh my gosh, oh my gosh!

For little old me? Someone wrote this as a gift to ME? I've never been gifted with a fic before and this was bloody amazing!!! Especially:

“Well, I do have phenomenal taste in clothes,” Draco said with the exaggerated somberness of the very inebriated. 

“God’s honest truth, that,” Harry said charitably

and this:

And I want you so much that my balls ache with it.” This was said in an earthy growl, and Harry’s breath stuttered.  “I ache right . . . here.” Draco slid his hips forward, and Harry felt the stiffness of Draco’s cock and the soft globes just beneath as the slender hips rotated on him, grinding that softness into his hardened length.

Oh and ESPECIALLY this:

And I’ve a present for you, Harry.”  Harry lifted his head and looked into the grey eyes, now on his, both warm and knowing.  He leaned back in, lips brushing the shell of Harry’s ear.  “It’s your lucky day.  I don’t top.”

Gah! I'm melted! A MILLION thank yous to whomever chose to gift m with this lovely hot moment between two of my favorite boys. :o)

 

Lead Time by gingerale Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 7]
Summary: New Year's Eve...
Categories: Remains of the Day > Drabbles
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drabble
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: None
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2007-12) Secret Yule Challenge
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2007-12) Secret Yule Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 970 Read Count: 1089
[Report This] Published: 12/16/2007 Updated: 12/16/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 12/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh wow! I cannot believe this wonderful story was for ME! It was perfect and brilliant and I LOVED it!

 I really, REALLY liked:

So she turned right towards empty balcony thinking that if she could wait seven years to kiss the boy she’d always known was hers, she could wait a few minutes more for the chance properly catalogue his flavour.

That was wonderful!

Thank you so much, my Secret Elf!