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Leave the Baby and Run by deenas Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: A weekend getaway leads to two lovely announcements.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, James (younger) Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Erotica, Ficlet, Fluff
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 855 Read Count: 2509
[Report This] Published: 08/13/2007 Updated: 08/13/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 08/13/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Leave the Baby and Run

*giggle*

 That was lovely and funny and HOT!

That Which Divides Us by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 48]
Summary: Three years after what would have been their seventh year at Hogwarts the war grinds on between the forces of light and Voldemort’s minions. But even within the ranks of the Order there are vast disagreements over what is good for the ‘chosen one’ and his volatile relationship with Draco Malfoy has many on edge. Sometimes even the best intentions can reap disaster.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Harry Potter
Genres: Action/Adventure, Erotica, Romance
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 125762 Read Count: 24748
[Report This] Published: 08/18/2007 Updated: 10/11/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 08/24/2007 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Oh my. Poor Draco! But, is he remembering Harry? It's just so sad that they were torn from each other.

I'm still not sure I have fogiven Hermione but at least she had the sense to take precautions.

I just really, REALLY want Harry to find out his soulmate is still alive. Please? LoL. I know, I know, then the story would be over but this is just so sad.

But brilliant! It's a very moving story.



Author's Response: Thanks, love!  And you're in my thoughts right now!

Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 08/22/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my goodness

Barbara, you did it again! You have me wriggling in my seat with this one as much as I was wriggling with Now and Then. And I'm so happy that Draco isn't an evil psycopath again! LoL.

This is fascinating. I love then tension. Although I am a bit concerned that Hermione is willing to do "anything" for Harry. I do hope she doesn't get carried away and do something "for his own good". I'll admit, the volatile and dangerous nature of Harry and Draco's relationship makes me shiver. All that testosterone, no real "poufyness" LoL. I'm loving it. Just delicious.

And now finally... Ron. Oh how I love your Ron. He's just amazing and so gorgeously protective. *sigh* You've reeled me in again.

Onto the next chapter!

*doing the happy dance*



Author's Response:

I adore your reviews...I really do. 

Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 08/22/2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh God! Oh no! Poor Harry, this is just so heartbreaking! I know Harry will be fine but it's just so cruel, what they're planning. Stupid Ministry, why can't they just be happy for Harry?

Ok, rant over. LoL

If this was a movie I'd have my hands over my eyes and be peeking through my fingers.

You can take it as a huge compliment that I'm so completely involved in this story and it's only chapter 2. LoL

*takes a deep breath*

On to chapter 3

Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 08/22/2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh and  forgot to add that the picture in my mind that you painted of Harry coming into the kitchen, geared for battle and so determined.... Positively edible.

Author's Response: Yeah.  Yummm, huh?  I kinda got off on that myself.

Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 08/22/2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Ohhhhhh you know most of the time I really, truly love Hermione but I cannot believe she did that and I hope she feels horribly, terribly guilty!

 *sigh*

I know, I know, she did it out of love for Harry and to protect him and all that but OH MY GOD! This is just heart wrenching!

Gaahhhhhhhh!

They must find each other again, they simply must!

Seriously, the only thing that's keeping me going here is the promise of no holds barred, amazing, incredible, hot and sweaty reunion sex.

*giggle* My goodness, I'm a bit dramatic tonight, aren't I?

Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 08/22/2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ok no ranting this time. I'm pretty sure Hermione feels suitably horrified and now I'm counting on our clever girl to come up with a way to reunite those two. I just hope they forgive her. Harry will I'm sure. Well mostly sure, anyway.

I'm dying to know what Ron's reaction is to her part in the plan. And poor Draco! Just where the heck did they send him, anyway?

How many chapters are planned? Please tell me they won;t be without each other for too long?

*lower lip trembling*

Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 08/22/2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh please, my most lovely storyteller, please tell me it won't be long for an update?

wow I've missed you! I've missed the way your writing always has me begging for more. LoL.

Oh poor Harry, that was just wretched. I would have been crying the whole time I was writing that scene with Remus. Just so heartbreaking. And he wants him in Godric's Hollow with his parents. So sad.

*sniffs*

Well I'm off to bed now in the hopes that my sweet hubby will ..er... cheer me up. *giggle*

Cannot wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response: Well, I hoped that your hubby was able to cheer you up!  And I've missed you!  Your reviews are always so much fun.  It was sad to write; I did tear up, I admit it.  And you know me, I put them through alot before I 'save' them! 

Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 08/26/2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

‘Beloved, wait for me…’

Oh my gosh I just got goosebumps! *shivers* So tragic.

Ohhhhh I want Draco to remember and I want Harry to find out and I want Hermione to admit everything and I want hot passionate reunion sex and..and..and

Well I'm not sure what else, but I'll settle for an update. LoL

Hurry, Hurry! *blows kisses*



Author's Response: I love your reviews; you're so enthusiastic it makes my day!  and I promise to deliver on your list...at least part of it!  Love ya!  B.

Breathing Through by mapleandmahogany, Quizzical Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary: Ron held them both, as best he could around her expanded frame, pulling Harry close to Hermione's body. Ron whispered words of support onto her neck, placing kisses behind her earlobe. She arched her head back, letting herself drown in their touch.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Three of Hearts
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Erotica, Romance, Trio
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Het, OC, Slash, Threesome
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7039 Read Count: 5035
[Report This] Published: 08/31/2007 Updated: 08/31/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 08/31/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Breathing Through

Oh that was just wonderful! I haven't read any other stories in this series but I definitely will now. It was beautiful!

Author's Response:

We appreciate that! (maple says; yes, do read the series, it's thoughtful and clever and lovely) Thank you!

~M and Q 

Raising the Dead by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Harry and Ron are working for the Auror’s Department, and while sitting a stake out in an unlikely location, have a meaningful conversation and find a way to pass the time.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Changing Room
Characters: Harry Potter, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, D/S, EWE, Minor Fluff, Public Sex, Rimming, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5024 Read Count: 1623
[Report This] Published: 09/25/2007 Updated: 09/25/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 09/25/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ok I loved it at the challenge and I still love it now! and this is still my favorite line:

Instinctively Harry lifted his hand and clamped it over Ron’s mouth, cutting off the sound and his other arm clamped tight around his chest, holding his heaving body pressed against his own

OMG! *falls over dead*



Author's Response: I can always count on you to make my day.  I love you!!!!

After King's Cross by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 36]
Summary: Past Featured StoryHarry is a feeling a bit melancholy after his boys have left for Hogwarts, but his wife wants his undivided attention.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Genres: Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, Het, Minor Fluff, Public Sex, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5615 Read Count: 9881
[Report This] Published: 10/19/2007 Updated: 10/19/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 10/20/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh Barbara you made me cry! Again! LoL.

That was amazing and lovely and exactly how I picture Harry and Ginny, still so much in love and unable to keeps their hands off each other no matter how much time has passed. Just beautiful and HOT.

As much as I adore your H/D, this pairing is what drew me into fandom to begin with and I have a very special place in my heart for these two together.

 And twins.. that's what really got me crying! "Fred and George." I loved Trelawney's prediction! So only to more to go then? LoL.

Thank you so much for a wonderful read, you've made my day :o)



Author's Response: You're welcome, love.  These two were my first favorites too, they were what pulled me in to begin with.  Writing this was fun, and extremely nostalgic for me!  Glad you liked it!

Vengeance is Mine by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary: Some things are simply unforgiveable.
Categories: Dark Tales > Going Under
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Dudley Dursley, Petunia Dursley, Ron Weasley, Vernon Dursley
Genres: Angst, Darkfic, Drama
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Character Death, Strong Language, Violence
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1692 Read Count: 1383
[Report This] Published: 10/30/2007 Updated: 10/30/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 10/30/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Vengeance is Mine

*shivers*

 Bravo! I like vengeful!Draco. Remind me never to get on his bad side, yeah? That was very powerful.



Author's Response: Thanks, love!  I'm glad that you liked this.  And yes, a pissed off Draco is a scary Draco.  Don't you just love him? 

Wednesday Dates by Fizzmonkeys Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Past Featured StoryEven after years of marriage, some of Harry's most treasured times were his dates with Ginny.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Tragedy
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Minor Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3267 Read Count: 1251
[Report This] Published: 11/04/2007 Updated: 11/05/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 11/06/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh my gosh that was beautiful! You've got me in tears here. Very well done.

Author's Response: *hugs* Thank you so much. I'm so glad that you liked it.

Love Lies Bleeding by oldenuf2nobetter Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary: During her sixth year at Hogwarts, Ginny Weasley discovers a spell that allows her to turn a treasured birthday gift into a window on Harry Potter's soul.  What she sees is not what she expected...
Categories: Dark Tales > Going Under
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Genres: Angst, Darkfic, Drama, Erotica, Romance, Tragedy
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Angst, Bloodplay, Character Death, EWE, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Masturbation, RST, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Suicide, Voyeurism
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9559 Read Count: 4863
[Report This] Published: 11/17/2007 Updated: 11/17/2007
Reviewer: Tart Signed
Date: 11/21/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh wow! That was just..well heartbreaking. But beautiful. Lovely but sorrowful. Your descriptions were amazing. That last bit, Harry's green eye in the shard of broken mirror was powerful. I suppose Ginny only had herself to blame, she had been warned after all. Her anguish, her obsession was very tangible. Very well done.

Author's Response: Thanks, love!