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Within You, Without You by mapleandmahogany Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 98]
Summary: Unless time had changed things very much, she knew the intense gaze of those green eyes meant that he wanted her as much as she did him.

“Gin?” Harry said, as one hand reached up to stroke her hair, too intimate for a friend.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Erotica, Fluff, Mystery, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het, Minor Fluff, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 63280 Read Count: 22744
[Report This] Published: 06/26/2006 Updated: 06/22/2007
Reviewer: Antosha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 07/13/2006 Title: Chapter 3: A Day In the Life

Do you know, I just picked up the Beatles theme? XD

Lovely--I'm enjoying reading this. 

 

And you've got to love Mrs. Weasley's satisfaction at getting her husband alone for the night. Go, Molly! 



Author's Response:

I'm thrilled to bits that you are reading. Thank you very much!

Yeah, that Molly girl is no slouch in my book. ;p

Reviewer: Antosha Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 08/07/2006 Title: Chapter 4: Every Little Thing

:-D

Lucky Arthur! XD

 

And lucky Harry. And lucky Ginny...

 

He has been learning a thing or two, hasn't he? 



Author's Response:

Heh - you like the Arthur/Molly parts eh? ....there's more to be seen from those two....

Yeah, that Harry's not a kid anymore, is he? Thank you for the R&R!

Nail Polish (8-06 Challenge) by plaidphoenix Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Written for The Quidditch Pitch's August challenge. I was given a prompt of Harry/Ginny/Luna and Harry paints the girls toenails.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Drabbles
Characters: Various
Genres: Comedy
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2006-08) August Challenge: The Anything Goes Challenge
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2006-08) August Challenge: The Anything Goes Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 531 Read Count: 802
[Report This] Published: 08/09/2006 Updated: 08/09/2006
Reviewer: Antosha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 08/10/2006 Title: Chapter 1: Nail Polish

Yay for the H/G/L!

 

And won't Ron be... surprised! XD 

Talking In Code by Jenadamson Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: The idea of revenge can get under your skin, seep into your heart and your blood and your bones. (Ron/Pansy)
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Ernie Macmillan, Ron Weasley
Genres: None
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4693 Read Count: 2492
[Report This] Published: 02/26/2007 Updated: 02/26/2007
Reviewer: Antosha Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 02/28/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I read this over on LJ, and wanted to wait till I'd had a chance to go through it again before commenting—for obvious reasons. XD

I love your take on this sort-of-pairing. The previous fic that you wrote around them—"The Difference Between Night and Day"—was from Ron's pov and so, so sad, yet hopeful, in an Anne Frank kind of way.

This manages the same feat. The theme of injustice and revenge is such an interesting one, and Pansy's such an interesting character to take it on. I'm never quite sure just what it is she's so angry and obsessed about—Draco's death? Lucius's escape and resurrection? The betrayal of everything that Harry & Co. (with Parkinson and Malfoy, apparently) fought for?

It doesn't matter. I believe that she's obsessed, and it's very clear that she's hella pissed.

It's funny—one of the reasons that I needed to reread the fic was that it wasn't clear which Malfoy she killed at the beginning.

Again. It didn't matter. it still worked. All the better, in fact, because it made the scenes with Draco all the more interesting (which is always good for me—I usually find him about as compelling as earwax).

And I love Ron here—that after all he's lost, after all he's been through, he has reached a place that at least resembles peace—Zen, as Pansy sees it. And that he's "got big arms to wrap around her and he understands the value of secrets kept, and the importance of letting people go when they need to be gone." I love that!

But where's Ginny? :-( 



Author's Response: :) Thank you so much for the review. I\'m so pleased that it gave you something to think about. The structure of the fic was such fun for me to figure out. one of the reasons that I needed to reread the fic was that it wasn\'t clear which Malfoy she killed at the beginning. I actually went back and forth over tipping off the reader right away that it was Malfoy Sr or not, but then I decided to be mean and let them figure it out on their own. :) Ron...was like Pansy\'s anchor in a lot of ways. The story is very much Pansy\'s story - (which was why no Ginny, she\'s around there somewhere, being Ginny!like. I did have a scene where Ginny and Pansy spoke, but it didn\'t further the story along so I cut it) - but I liked that Ron could just be comfortable. Maybe not happy, but at least peaceful. Anyway, dear, thank you so much for this. I\'m so pleased you liked it.

Reviewer: Antosha Signed
Date: 09/27/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

:poke:

Rec'ed by Know It Alls 

 

 

 

 

 :-)

L'Île des Deuxièmes Chances by inell Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
Summary: It was meant to be a short holiday from a stressful situation. Instead of simply finding escape, though, Pansy ends up finding herself and learning that second chances are precious.
Categories: The Broomshed > The Ladies Room
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ernie Macmillan
Genres: Drama, Erotica
Time Period: None
Warnings: FemSlash
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10735 Read Count: 831
[Report This] Published: 04/05/2007 Updated: 04/05/2007
Reviewer: Antosha Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 04/10/2007 Title: Chapter 1: L'Île des Deuxièmes Chances

I know I've responded to this fic before, but I really do love it—Pansy's ambivalence, Hermione's not-quite-perfect maturity, and the sensuality of the place itself make this a really lovely fic.

Friends by inell Rated: FG - Family Guidance [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Luna’s inspired the summer after her fourth year at Hogwarts
Categories: Hallowed Halls > From Diagon Alley to Hogwarts
Characters: Luna Lovegood
Genres: Ficlet
Time Period: Voldemort's First War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 763 Read Count: 353
[Report This] Published: 08/09/2007 Updated: 08/09/2007
Reviewer: Antosha Signed
Date: 08/19/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Friends

Oh, this is just wonderful—a perfect missing moment. Luna's ceiling was one of the things in DH that really blew me away, and you captured its creation just perfectly.

Two Birds of a Feather by tqpannie Rated: RT - Restricted Themes [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Past Featured StoryRon was frustrated
Categories: The Broomshed > Drabbles
Characters: Nymphadora Tonks, Ron Weasley, Susan Bones
Genres: Drabble
Time Period: Voldemort Vanishes
Warnings: Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 224 Read Count: 2064
[Report This] Published: 10/22/2007 Updated: 10/22/2007
Reviewer: Antosha Signed
Date: 10/23/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

:snort:

Amazing how quickly you can fix something that's broken—with the right training and the right technique. ;-) 

Summary: Past Featured StoryInfested with Marnalumps - Can I Join You? - Stuff It - Some Spurlies Got Into the Wine - Isn't It Wonderful?

Luna/Dean, Luna/Dean/Seamus
Categories: The Broomshed > Self Pleasure, The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings, The Broomshed > More Than Two
Characters: Argus Filch, Dean Thomas, Luna Lovegood, Rubeus Hagrid, Seamus Finnigan
Genres: Comedy, Erotica, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Het, Masturbation, Minor Fluff, Slash, Threesome
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1926 Read Count: 4194
[Report This] Published: 01/24/2008 Updated: 01/24/2008
Reviewer: Antosha Signed
Date: 03/10/2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This really is wonderful—very Luna. You know which one I loved most? The one with Neville's Gran. XD

Well done!

Said The Spider To The Fly by mapleandmahogany Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Harry takes Ginny on a private assignment.

Warnings: vampiric blood, depictions of slash and femmeslash (not H/G or canon characters)

Written for Changing Season's H/G fic exchange.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Genres: Action/Adventure, Erotica, PWP, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Het, Orgy, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Vampirism
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5122 Read Count: 1686
[Report This] Published: 04/09/2008 Updated: 04/09/2008
Reviewer: Antosha Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: 04/12/2008 Title: Chapter 1: said the spider to the fly

Oh, my! This is incedibly sexy, obviously, and it's a wonderful image, both of the vampire culture—which plays on the human/fandom fascination with
vamps—and of Harry and Ginny. It's a picture of their relationship after DH that I haven't seen much, neither angsty and PTSD-y, nor lovey-dovey. Their staying apart and coming together make perfect sense. And are quite hot, of course! ;-)

Author's Response: I can't help getting all giggly and befuddled that you read my story. *fangirls* I really wanted to create something that you don't often see in H/G fic - a totally different setting. I also really like relationships based on friendship and I don't think we often see enough friendship in H/G fics. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

Waking by TheTrioMakesMeHot Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 9]
Summary: I get to watch her sleep, and then tease her awake slowly.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Genres: Erotica, Ficlet
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 629 Read Count: 1689
[Report This] Published: 10/12/2008 Updated: 10/12/2008
Reviewer: Antosha Signed
Date: 10/19/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Waking

Hee.

Been there! XD

Nicely set up—and more satisfying for the reader than for poor Harry, I'm afraid.



Author's Response: Yeah .... I did feel a little guilty about poor Harry (I'd happily ease his pain).  Can't say I've been there myself (2 kids, but no morning sickness), so my hubby was pretty lucky compared to Harry.  Thanks for taking time to review!