Reviewer: charma10 Signed 



Date: 02/25/2007
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19
I only jumped on this bandwagon fairly recently, it was actually Linda's trailer on YouTube that help me find this story. I am so glad I did. I love it. I can't flaw it at all. I love the characterisation, I love the fact that Ron and Hermione didn't run right back into a relationship, and I love the fact that even though they seem to be getting there, anything could really happen in this story.
You write well, not too much detail, but enough to really keep me captivated. And on this chapter in particular. I love the transition that you have come up with for Ron and Hermione's relationship. It's good that in a very very loose way they are starting to talk about their chance at a future while having a lot of fun doing it.
The fact that he does give her a genuine glimmer of hope really sat well with me, because it wasn't the promise of a man who is just going to forget the betrayal of the woman he loved, but it was the thoughts of a man who wants to forgive her. And I'm not sure if that's the point you were trying to get across, that he wants to forgive her, but that's what I got from that little sentence, and it might make me seem like I read to much into it but I just had to tell you.
So thanks for updating! It was worth the wait. Congratulations on a fantastic story.