Penname: tellemonstar [Contact] Real name: Chantelle
Member Since: 05/05/2007
Membership status: Administrator
Bio:
By day I'm a Honeydukes Sweets Taster, by night I beta Quidditch Pitch tales, chase Ron around Hogwarts to tie him up (although I will chase Neville or Fred if I can't find Ron) and evanesco typos and errant commas.
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Gilly-gryff by netbyrd Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: On the verge of leaving Hogwarts, Arthur does what he can to prove his love. Even if some of those things are a bit... unusual.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Arthur Weasley, Molly Weasley
Genres: Erotica
Time Period: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5120 Read Count: 1512
[Report This] Published: 10/19/2005 Updated: 10/19/2005
Reviewer: tellemonstar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05/25/2007 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Very cute. :D I love young Arthur and Molly stories, and nyour husband's suggestion made for a great one.

That Don't Make You No Lamb by Thistlerose Rated: RT - Restricted Themes [Reviews - 2]
Summary: "You run to the wolf in me; that don't make you no lamb."
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Fleur Delacour, Bill Weasley
Genres: Erotica
Time Period: None
Warnings: Contains Spoiler for HBP, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1997 Read Count: 802
[Report This] Published: 10/29/2005 Updated: 10/29/2005
Reviewer: tellemonstar Signed
Date: 08/11/2007 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Lovely. Nice to see a fic about howBill's scars affect him without Fleur being crazy or Bill lashing out. Lovely characterisation.

Unbridled by TheGiantSquid Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Past Featured StoryAfter a few weeks of dating, Remus and Tonks decide to take their relationship to the next level.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Nymphadora Tonks, Remus Lupin
Genres: Erotica, Fluff, PWP, Romance
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Het, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3117 Read Count: 1585
[Report This] Published: 01/13/2006 Updated: 01/13/2006
Reviewer: tellemonstar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/03/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Unbridled

It's nice to see a Remus/Tonks story that doesn't have Tonks as some wanton sex maniac and Remus as an uncontrollable beast. :D Well done.

The Perfect Christmas Present by magicofisis Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Ginny gives Harry a Christmas present that money can't buy.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5630 Read Count: 1551
[Report This] Published: 03/15/2006 Updated: 03/15/2006
Reviewer: tellemonstar Signed
Date: 10/03/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Brilliant. A great story, and lovely plot. :D

Just a Day at the Beach by abigail89 Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: While Harry and Hermione reconnect, Remus spends quality time with their children.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Remus Lupin, OFC, OMC, Harry Potter
Genres: Fluff, PWP, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Het, Major Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3035 Read Count: 583
[Report This] Published: 09/05/2006 Updated: 09/05/2006
Reviewer: tellemonstar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 06/03/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Just a Day at the Beach

awww... this was gorgeous, and you got the little ones voice down to a tee as well. 'Uncle Remy' sounds like he would be rather fun. 

There is no Happy Ever After by IamAGhost Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Past Featured StoryPansy has been betrothed since birth had hates her life. When a moment comes along for her to witness true happiness, she takes it.
Categories: The Broomshed > Dark Side
Characters: Ernie Macmillan, Harry Potter, Ginny Weasley
Genres: Drama
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Character Death, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Suicide, Voyeurism
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3036 Read Count: 2286
[Report This] Published: 03/15/2007 Updated: 03/16/2007
Reviewer: tellemonstar Signed
Date: 10/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was very well done. Not many stories like this are, but this really was well done. Very sad too.

Perception Isn't Everything by BrandedFaithfully Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 36]
Summary: The Ministry is changing its image.  What’s a young, proper, career-minded and love-starved girl to do when she’s no longer the Ministry’s ‘Poster Child?’  And, who’s giving her a little push in the right direction?  Eighteen months after the fall of our favorite villain.  Ron/Hermione, Harry/Ginny.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Comedy, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 112394 Read Count: 27662
[Report This] Published: 06/02/2007 Updated: 09/14/2007
Reviewer: tellemonstar Signed
Date: 09/28/2007 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - To Bonk Or Not To Bonk...That is the Question

This was delightful. I loved the club scene and the chapter where Harry proposed was beautiful. Such a great story :D 

Author's Response: Dear tellemonstar, Yes, that club scene was in my head for a long time.  It's a long chapter, but I had to get it all on paper!!  I liked Harry's proposal, too.  He just seems like such a sweet. romantic guy, despite his horrible upbringing.  Thank you for the lovely review.  I hope you'll read some of my other things - of course there are zillions of other fabulous authors on this site as well.  So, keep reading and I'll try to keep writing!!  Take care.

The Longest Wait by princess2891 Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Hermione finds out that she is pregnant. What is her reaction? How will Ron react?
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2235 Read Count: 780
[Report This] Published: 06/13/2007 Updated: 06/13/2007
Reviewer: tellemonstar Signed
Date: 06/16/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great to see your story is up on the site. Can't wait for the next chapter. :D *hugs*

Now More Than Ever by Tart Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary: It was the one thing she wanted the most and the very last thing she expected.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama, Romance
Time Period: None
Warnings: Angst, Het, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9903 Read Count: 3719
[Report This] Published: 07/02/2007 Updated: 07/09/2007
Reviewer: tellemonstar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 07/10/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm such a bad beta, not responding to you. *smacks self* Glad to see chapter 2 is up though. You can let everyone blame me for forgetting to check to  seeing if chcapter 2 was waiting for me. :D 

Author's Response: It's OK. LoL.

Remus' New Toy by Wormykins Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Remus keeps getting out of bed to play, so his parents have taken drastic action. Unfortunately, this only makes him feel worse.
Categories: Bad Moon Rising > School Days
Characters: Remus Lupin
Genres: Angst, Ficlet, General
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1024 Read Count: 342
[Report This] Published: 09/10/2007 Updated: 09/10/2007
Reviewer: tellemonstar Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/14/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Remus' New Toy

Awwww. A beautiful characterisation of young Remus. Great job.

Opportunity Knocks by coffee_n_cocoa Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Tasked with degnoming the garden, Ron and Hermione take advantage of their time alone.
Categories: The Broomshed > Erotic Couplings
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Erotica, Fluff, PWP
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Contains Spoilers for DH, EWE, Het, Major Fluff, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1451 Read Count: 2351
[Report This] Published: 09/17/2007 Updated: 09/17/2007
Reviewer: tellemonstar Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/19/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great story. I enjoyed it, and nice characterisations.

Bodies In Motion by alloy Rated: FG13 - Family Guidance13 starstarstarstar [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Harry begins to understand the depth of his friends involvement.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Drabbles
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Romance
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 218 Read Count: 1747
[Report This] Published: 09/18/2007 Updated: 09/18/2007
Reviewer: tellemonstar Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 09/19/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Bodies In Motion

Lovely. Such an interesting perspective of Ron & Hermione.

Wednesday Dates by Fizzmonkeys Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary: Past Featured StoryEven after years of marriage, some of Harry's most treasured times were his dates with Ginny.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Tragedy
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: Minor Fluff
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3267 Read Count: 1266
[Report This] Published: 11/04/2007 Updated: 11/05/2007
Reviewer: tellemonstar Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 01/21/2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh wow, this was a great story. So sad, and very touching, and you wrote Harry perfectly.

I Would Totally Shag Your Father! by Gabriel Artisan Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Albus-Severus and Scorpius are a far cry from Harry and Draco--no one knows this more than Albus, himself. But can he convince a closeted Scorpius this? Their fathers may have denied themselves during their Hogwarts years, but Albus will be damned if he let's that happen with Scorpius.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Eternity
Characters: Albus Severus Potter, Scorpius Malfoy
Genres: Ficlet, Fluff, Romance
Time Period: Next Generation, Post-War
Warnings: Minor Fluff, OC
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1417 Read Count: 1030
[Report This] Published: 11/21/2007 Updated: 11/21/2007
Reviewer: tellemonstar Signed
Date: 11/25/2007 Title: Chapter 1: I Would Totally Shag Your Father!

 Awwww, this was delightful. Well written, and a rather interesting concept about how things might have been different for both of them.



Author's Response: Thank you very much!  Both for reading and taking the time to respond! 

Hell Is A Five Year Old by dulcamatrix Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Small children and our Potions Master do not mix.
Categories: Bad Moon Rising > War and Peace
Characters: Severus Snape
Genres: Comedy
Time Period: Post-War
Warnings: None
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2007-11) Snapealicious Snapeabration!
Challenges: Monthly Challenge: (2007-11) Snapealicious Snapeabration!
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1942 Read Count: 770
[Report This] Published: 11/22/2007 Updated: 11/23/2007
Reviewer: tellemonstar Signed starstarstarstar
Date: 11/25/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Haha! This was a great story - I could just imagine what Snape must have done to Dumbledore when he found him next. Or wanted to do, at least. Great story. Snape should deal with small children more often. :D

Author's Response:

i agree.  five year olds are the bain of many people's existence.  magical and muggle alike.

lol.

thanks for the review.  it means alot.