Penname: ClosetObjectivist [Contact] Real name: Cassy
Member Since: 06/26/2007
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Harry Potter and the Unbreakable Bond by Leviathan Rated: RT - Restricted Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Past Featured StoryWhen Hermione uses ancient magic to save Harry and Ron, the trio's lives are changed - forever! 

AU, Sixth-year.
Categories: The Broomshed > Ménage a Trio
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Action/Adventure, Comedy, Drama, Erotica, Fluff, Horror, Romance, Trio
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Alternate Universe, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH, Graphic Violence, Het, Hurt/Comfort, Masturbation, Slash, Strong Language, Strong Sexual Content, Threesome, Underage
Series: None
Chapters: 27 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 165896 Read Count: 127260
[Report This] Published: 10/14/2006 Updated: 04/08/2010
Reviewer: ClosetObjectivist Signed
Date: 12/08/2007 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter Twenty-One: "Teachers' Dirty Looks"

I liked this chapter a lot, but Ron's manner of speaking bothered me a bit, with the frequent truncations of "and" and interjections every few sentences. It seemed a bit off-character. Other than that, good chapter!

Author's Response:

There was something about the fact that Ron was not just speaking his friends, but telling a story, and in front of Dumbledore and Sirius especially, that informed the way he speaks here. I'm not sure exactly what it is. I'm experimenting a bit with cleaning it up somewhat.

Thanks for the review! 

Have A Little Faith by tqpannie Rated: GP - General Public starstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Ron realizes they have to let Harry go.
Categories: Remains of the Day > Leaving Feast, Hallowed Halls > From Diagon Alley to Hogwarts
Characters: Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Angst, Drama, General
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Angst
Series: The Faith Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 1280 Read Count: 981
[Report This] Published: 11/04/2007 Updated: 11/04/2007
Reviewer: ClosetObjectivist Signed
Date: 11/04/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great characterization of what went on inside the castle when Harry went into the forest -you captured their faith in Harry very well. Bravo!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Oh, Boy! I'm a Wizard! by humantales Rated: FG - Family Guidance starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: Dr. Sam Beckett leaps into a sixteen-year-old English schoolboy. Harry Potter. Written for Sycophant Hex's The Sky Is Falling festival. Pre-DH
Categories: Hallowed Halls > From Diagon Alley to Hogwarts, Crossovers > Television
Characters: Albus Dumbledore, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Remus Lupin, Ron Weasley, Severus Snape, Sirius Black
Genres: Crossovers
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Alternate Universe
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15764 Read Count: 3623
[Report This] Published: 11/05/2007 Updated: 11/09/2007
Reviewer: ClosetObjectivist Signed
Date: 11/07/2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oo, very interesting! I'm looking forward to seeing how you interpret this.

Author's Response: Thanks; I hope you enjoy it.

Reviewer: ClosetObjectivist Signed
Date: 11/10/2007 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Great story! Loved it!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Definitely Not a Mate Thing by kaalee Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: What happens in the dorm when the boys need to determine if an uncircumcised penis feels the same as one that is circumcised...
Categories: Hallowed Halls > From Diagon Alley to Hogwarts
Characters: Dean Thomas, Harry Potter, Neville Longbottom, Ron Weasley, Seamus Finnigan
Genres: Comedy
Time Period: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1654 Read Count: 1333
[Report This] Published: 03/02/2008 Updated: 03/02/2008
Reviewer: ClosetObjectivist Signed
Date: 03/02/2008 Title: Chapter 1: [definitely not a mate thing...]

Wonderful! Made me laugh quite a lot, I really enjoyed this story. :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad it made you laugh, that was definitely my goal. Thank you so much!

~kaalee

Book Three: Rivalry by Amythis Rated: MT - Mature Themes starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 0]
Summary: This is Book Three, but Year Four (since Years One and Two were so short) of the series Hermione Granger's Diary (I Mean Journal).  It is mostly Ron/Hermione, but contains Viktor/Hermione, Harry/Hermione, and even some fairly innocent Harry/Ron.
Categories: Hallowed Halls > Golden Trio
Characters: Alastor Moody, Cedric Diggory, Fleur Delacour, Ginny Weasley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Rita Skeeter, Ron Weasley, Rubeus Hagrid, Viktor Krum
Genres: Comedy, Drama, Trio
Time Period: Voldemort's Second War
Warnings: Character Death, Contains Spoiler for HBP, Contains Spoilers for DH
Series: Hermione Granger's Diary (I Mean Journal)
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 78738 Read Count: 19124
[Report This] Published: 07/12/2008 Updated: 10/26/2008
Reviewer: ClosetObjectivist Signed
Date: 08/21/2008 Title: Chapter 24: Twenty-Four: Ready to Tell

Wonderful chapter! This is a really innovative rendering of that time and the emotions that people must have been going through after Cedric's death. I'm wondering when Hermoine will start liking Ron, though! ;)