Date: 10/04/2007 02:05 PM Title: Turn the Page
I loved this fic. I actually love a lot of your stuff, since I am all about h/R and H/D pairings. You capture the deep bond between Harry and Ron so effectively. Your dialogue is well crafted as well. Thanks for writing...
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I truly appreciate all the comments. I think dialogue is my favorite thing to write and I always try to make conversations feel real and natural.
Date: 09/24/2007 07:05 AM Title: Tie Me Up…Please?
Just so you know, I spit out my drink at the end of this one - BRAVO! Brilliant. . .
What are you saying, Harry?” Ron asked coyly.
“Maybe I want more.”
Harry didn’t reply.
Ron stood and breathed the words against Harry’s neck, “Rougher?”
“Yes,” Harry whispered closing his eyes.
“To be commanded?”
“Yes.” It was barely audible.
“Do the dishes!”
Author's Response: Thanks :D
Date: 03/14/2007 04:00 AM Title: Tie Me Up…Please?
Oh, I love it! Ron's so sweet but also so evil.
"So Harry did the dishes and then went to the bedroom and gave it good to Ron."
And Harry's so accommodating. :) Lovely job!
Author's Response: Thanks, Ron's voice just popped in my head on this one.