



[Report This]Date: 11/11/2006 06:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
wonderfull charcterization, especally the "meltdown" Flawless




[Report This]Date: 11/11/2006 06:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
wonderfull charcterization, especally the "meltdown" Flawless




[Report This]Date: 05/01/2006 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
I just read the "hose" story earlier today, I loved the little tie in to it.
I am really enjoying your one shots. Look for words of praise for me as the day goes on :)