Date: 03/26/2008 04:09 AM Title: Chapter 30
God, this is a brilliant story! I can't tell you how much I love it; your writing's fantastic, every word you choose is perfect. Your Ron is the most delicious Auror ever, and Harry's the perfect foil for him. Sigh! When you read something as good as this, it's hard to ship anyone else, really! Great stuff. You should be really proud.
Date: 01/07/2008 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 30
I know I've already written a review already, but I just have to say something more.
Usually, I read only R/Hr stories, I don't really like slash ones, but your story blew my mind away. I couldn'g put it down when I read it, at the same time, I was afraid I would finish it too soon. I can't express enough how much I admire your work.
It's a classic, everybody should read it. (Of course you have to be of age)
Date: 09/05/2007 09:02 PM Title: Chapter 15
The paper dragon metaphor is great. The whole little bit there with the sketching and magical animation.
Normally a whole chapter of narration/introspection could be boring, but you really made this lovely. I ate it up.
Date: 09/05/2007 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
“I kissed you because I love you.”
I've been wanting to read this story for ages. It's revered as a 'classic' H/R fic and the only reason I haven't yet is because its so loooggg! But I'm enjoying it. Enjoying the AU-ness of it. The beauty of such rich characterizations and clever theories that you had without the aid of 3 final books of canon. Excellent. *continues reading*
Date: 12/20/2006 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 30
oh yey!! i'm finally done! and it was great! i loved it! the ending was perfect! and ron was amazing! the only thing: poor snape! he always gets kicked to the curb! in love triangles i like the endings to be threesomes. lol! but anyways, great job on your hella long story! it's rare to find a good plot with good porn too! ;)