



[Report This]Date: 04/27/2009 06:18 AM Title: Becoming His Own Man
A great story; well written, well developed, and fun to read. Thanks.
Date: 09/24/2007 08:31 AM Title: Becoming His Own Man
I love how you used the newspaper articles to further the story. It's so creative, and gives a fresh view of the story. Keep writing!




[Report This]Date: 04/29/2007 12:45 PM Title: Becoming His Own Man
That was very cute. I loved the newspaper articles that helped in telling the story.




[Report This]Date: 08/12/2006 09:50 PM Title: Becoming His Own Man
Really cute! I can't wait for the next chapter!




[Report This]Date: 07/26/2006 08:28 AM Title: Becoming His Own Man
Thats was great but I want more.
I loved the way you moved through the story using the newspaper articles at the beginning and end of the story. It was a nice way to tie everything together.
Now if I could just find page 3