Date: 08/01/2010 06:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
I can’t believe no one ever commented on this. I have read it before and I can’t believe I didn’t review then either. This was a bitter sweet story. You really captivated the reader with the characters’ emotional state. Because I’m such a “happy ending kind of person” I hope that one day there will be a follow up and they get saved. =) but either way it was a great well written story.