Date: 05/21/2011 03:39 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Immersion
Hi. Your story is absolutely amazing. I loved every second of it, even if I'm not a fan of anything with H/Hr, but you made it every interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter. It's been a long time since to last updated and I'm so excited for the next chapter. Please update a fast as you can;-) You're brilliant.
Date: 12/14/2010 02:23 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Immersion
"I may have been the catalyst for change by leaving two years ago, but it didn’t really start with me and it wouldn’t end that way either."
I loved this line because while Ron's absence was indeed the catalyst, all four of them were having problems long before he left and while it's admirable and so fantastic to see Ron taking responsability for his actions and what the pain they caused, i feel it's also important to note that they could have all said no to the changes that happened. They didn't and that's why all 4 of them a mess lol.
I don't see them every going back to how they were before, but i hope that once you clear the air between them you make the couples (if you intend on having R&HR and H&G together) go slow and start from scratch. Make them get to know each other rather then just get into bed, make the dating game happen to see them fully be strong couples once more you know ;).
I know you life has been busy and i trully hope it gets easier, but i guess i just wanted to beg for the next chapter because just like Ron i think i need to move forward and i can't do that until you post the "confrontation" now can i lol.
Date: 02/06/2010 05:10 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Memories of a Lifetime Ago
horrible but great place to leave this must read next chapter now...I should really be working or unpacking doing something productive towards everyday life...must read next chapter willpower is non existent.