Date: 09/05/2006 01:24 PM Title: A Trail of Persimmon
Lovely, lovely. Excellent from start to finish. I especialy loved this line:He was undone and rebound, What an excellent line.
Author's Response: Many thanks for your kind words! That particular line really resonated with one of my betas as well; I'm so glad it's effective and conveyed Harry's change in an eloquent way. Thank you for reading and leaving a review!