Date: 01/25/2007 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
EXCELLENT! I love the song and having a fanfic written in the theme couldnt have been better!
personally, I would have thrown in the line "haven't you people ever heard of closing the god damned door" somewhere. Maybe Draco's thoughts when he hears hermione and ginny before he realizes who it is? that's the line that always gets the song stuck in my head (like while working at a church camp...great...) so I badly wanted it worked into the story more than just the door being ajar. but it was awesome!