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Reviewer: SophiaMaria Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 01:29 PM Title: Surprise

Awww.  This was so sweet.

So Ron’s surprise was unparalleled when Harry Potter turned out to be a skinny, lonely, shabbily dressed little thing with broken glasses, wild hair, and frightened eyes.

 I love this characterization of Harry.  It's spot on, and I love seeing Harry through other people's eyes - especially his Ron's eyes.


Harry had chosen him.


Of course he did!  He's his Wheezy! 


Nice job!

Author's Response: thanks so much for your kind words! i appreciate how you pointed out what it was you liked the best. thank you very much!

Reviewer: evanesco75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03/21/2007 04:23 AM Title: Surprise

How sweet! Loved this.

Author's Response: thank you so much! i greatly appreciate your comments!  :)

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