Date: 12/23/2008 05:34 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story! Clever use of Hermione's Muggle-born status to introduce modern Muggle technology. Hermione's analytical approach to understanding an unfamiliar subject was consistant with her character from the books: turn to research to become more comfortable. The Fem/Slash pairings were pretty sexy too, and the various characters included were described in a way that seemed true to their personalities from the books , but I would've liked the story even more if the descriptions weren't so brief. They were like a promising beginning for each pair, but ended abruptly just as the action was getting started. I'd really like to read a continuation of this fanfic, particularly with an expanded version of the various couples.