Date: 02/07/2010 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Nice story.....would be funny to see everyone's reaction later down the road if they found out about it,Draco and Ginny would have a fit I bet LOL.PS...I have to say the woman they got to play Narcissa in the HBP movie wasn't to big on the looks dept.
Date: 08/21/2007 03:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
I love this story. I've read it before on skyhawke, I believe, and seeing as there are very few Harry/Narcissa stories out there, this one stands out quite memorably. Very well written and I enjoyed Harry's internal dialogue. I always thought this pairing would be quite interesting psychologically in a full-length fic. Narcissa's motives are understandable, even gives her some layers, and it would be a really compulsive act for Harry and confuse him to no end. Lots of ground for a bit of dark self-exploration.
Now, Harry, Narcissa AND Lucius would be a total mind-trip. Oh, that icy blond couple would have him tied up in knots deliciously; figuratively and literally!
Great way you folded it into canon, too. A believable excerpt.
Author's Response: Oh, thank you so much! This was definitely a challenge for me to write; I'm pleased it worked for you.