Date: 12/14/2007 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Your story was really different. I liked the structure of the confessions, and the heartbreak of the final confession. It was a realistic and well-done alternative viewpoint. Great job.
Author's Response: Thank you. This was actually the second HP fic I ever wrote! I'm glad the POV worked for you; I rarely write in 1st person.