Date: 05/13/2009 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 1
Yowza! Hawt!! Your writing, as always, steams off the page. I'm of two minds about Harry's actions, in a real-world perspective, but then in a 'real-world' no one would have legilimency. It seemed that the real violation Harry made was not of Draco's body, but of his mind and privacy. However, since Draco doesn't seem to be complaining.... (-: All's fair and all that.
I do love how you keep an intelligent sense of humor going through it all; it really beings the characters to life and makes 'em dance! I look forward to reading more of yours...
Date: 12/06/2007 07:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, that was hot. I love dom Harry, love the way he punished Draco for his past sins, then forgave him and gave him what he needed. I love how you spun the D/S relationship, Draco's desires, Harry's reactions. I can just picture Harry sitting under his invisibility cloak watching Draco in his room, at first shocked at Draco's "interests", but then figuring it out and deciding how to take charge. Go Harry!
Very well done!