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Reviewer: dumdoc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04/30/2009 08:42 AM Title: One

You have done a remarkable job of capturing the emotional effects of doing society's dirty work and the stress that goes with it. A wonderful story; thanks.

Author's Response: Thanks very much for the read and mosy kind comments.  I'm so pleased that Harry's motivations rang true for you.  Peace!

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Date: 10/15/2008 03:54 PM Title: One

Thank you. One of the few stories that treat Harry as a person. A 17 year old who is involved in a life thretening series of horrors must have some emotional problems. Handled nicely.

Author's Response: Thank you!  I'd hoped that Harry's character would be believable.  Cheers!

Reviewer: melakem Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/25/2008 10:31 AM Title: One

Wow!  That was a terrific story!  You are a marvelous author!

Slash is not my thing.  I find that many writers of smut fall into the trap of writing smut for the sake of smut, and while that can be a bit of candy to read...if I'm going to indulge in reading that, slash isn't what I choose.  It's harder to find authors who really create characters and relationships where there just happens to be smut tossed in. 

Your story succeeds.  Take out the smut and it's still a story that holds my interest. Change the characters to women, men and women, aliens, bunny rabbits, whatever, it's the interaction of the characters and the intimacy of their relationships that keep me reading.

I came to your writing with an open mind because I saw you reccomended by an author whose work I admire.  Open minded, but not really expecting to be hooked by what I found.  But, here I am, hooked indeed.  I'm very happy to have found another author whose work I like this much.  Thanks a million!



Author's Response: Wow, thanks so very much for your most kind words.  I'm so very pleased that the story worked so well.  Cheers!

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