Date: 03/26/2008 08:49 AM Title: Chapter 1
This was a really nice surprise. After reading the tagline and even the first few paragraphs, I was expecting a lot more smut (which would have been ok), but instead, I find a small, sweet character study. You've done a great job of capturing Neville's complexity, as well as his basic decency, and you've fleshed out Hannah (no pun intended, really) into a real, believeable character I'd like to get to know better. Thank you for a great story!
Author's Response: And thank you for your great review! I always blush when my stories are called "character studies." I think it's because deep down, I know I write that way because I have not much imagination for plot! :D